Very well done :D You captured their relationship perfectly, as well as the dispute they're bound to have/have had with both of them growing up and Tails becoming more independent. Their argument was kind of comical, and seeing them make up was sweet. I love how you had Tails admit that he'd wanted to be Sonic, only to have Sonic admit that Tails was the kind of person he wished he'd been when he was a kid. It's just too sweet _ Wonderful little story.

I absolutely loved reading this!

Ya know, I don't even care that it was all dailouge SP, I LOVED THIS! Way to go Brent-ka!

You may not think this is anything special, but I gaurentee you it was. Its neat to see a perspective involving Tails and Sonic as they let their guard down. I could totally see them "fighting" with each other like this on occasion. Hey even the best of brothers like to pick at each other playfully. :)

FANTASTIC.

This is on a whole other level to the other fics I've read today; really. I can't thank you enough for writing this, as it has restored my faith in fiction.

The spontaneity of the dialogue, the easy back-and-forth between the two creatures; it's brilliant. And the fact that you managed to cram so many unexpected puns in just makes it even moar impressive.

My favourite part was "You're like a ball of dryer lint. Fluffy, and annoying." Sweet.

Since the words under the 'Submit Review' button demand some criticism of me, I'll echo everyone else and say Tails was a little OOC, but I don't think youcould seriously have avoided that and maintained the density of wit. So it's entirely worth it.

It was good to read something that hinted at the old days of Sonic and Tails. It calls the "Adventures of Sonic the Hedgehog" to mind. As far as I know, Sonic is never even mentioned as liking chili dogs in the current gaming franchise. It's rather sad that it isn't. A little out of character for Tails to call Sonic stupid and try to hit him, but it was okay anyway.

I really liked the way you showed their relantionship. Your story was really cute and adorable . I found little agrument amoung them a little amusing, and I can really see siblings acting in that way. Great job!

"Dear Lord, I think I can see half my grey matter on the grass..."

Tails scratched the back of your head.

"...Otherwise the world would probably implode on itself from the massive wave of stupidity."

This is so naked it's almost sad.

Dialogue, quote, dialogue, quote, dialogue. The circle is never broken, and there's no description of worth in this piece.

It could have been something, but it ended up as nothing.

this stiry is alwsome!

I thought this was nice :D

The arguement was kinda funny, too. Poor Sonic is a little thick sometimes. Well done! Always good to see some focus on their brotherly bond.

Take care!

Brent I don't think you get it at all. You're spontaneous whims easily become your greatest works and you don't even realize it. Your greatest strength as a writer, maybe as a person in genereal is this: you understand people. I'm not talking as individuals or limited you to human beings (obviously Sonic and Miles (that's right I know stuff too) are a hedgehog and a kitsune). You understand the way that people relate to each other. You unleash personalities without reserve or retreat. It's your gift. Use it to make more masterpieces.

BRILLIANT!

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Interesting oneshot. I rather liked it quite a bit. To say the least this is my second uhm what do you call it, sonic something fic, and I kind of like it. I really do not know what sonic is, a game, anime or whatnot, but it's nice to read new genres(?). Well I suppose I'll go check out your other piece, and go from there. And if any one could tell me, what is this sonic thing about? I'd like to know some more info on it, please if you would, thanks!

God Bless

Sapphire Lupe

Nice! You really portrayed their relationship well! One of the best oneshots I've ever read! It seemed so flowing and smooth. Great job Brent-Ka! Great job!