Reviews for Friendship Betrayed
mamita chapter 14 . 5/10/2014
Hello, I liked your fic , I hope you upload soon more chapters, my favorite couple of all this series or movie is CharliexRon , although a shame there are not many fics of them , Harry is dumb , are all that bad with Ron , Harry always , and think what you may think or feel Ron? , that pig is cruel Lucius , Ron is worth more than you think and think , you think Harry this, Harry that, but never see Ron , not even his family , are fools , I here love the relationship of Harry with Ron , because in the end Harry and others have noticed Ron and what it Ron and what he feels, and I'm glad that here has been no heterosexual couples , because I do not like at all , at least not here , I really like that you put more POVs of others, not only Harry or Ron , but also from Bill or Charlie and the twins, I like to see what they think of Ron , Draco is often pig , and although I like Draco 's relationship with Ron , passed , poor Ron , here Ron is passed , it is true , of all they have done more miserable, Ron I love, but sometimes it happens , Harry goes well , when it is assumed that these two are inseparable, and very close, I love incest slash between Ron and his brothers, or is also fraternal , or couples with Harry , Ron always be submissive , not for nothing , but I like it like that, although it is a shame you did not put the whole lemon , except Ginny, not I like her, I do not like the straight with Ron , and less if Hermione , hehe , very silly at times , at the end by himself looking for the trouble, but hey , I hope you do more fics Ron , because it is a shame there are not many, still , so thanks and kisses.
Amanda-et-William chapter 11 . 7/30/2009
Oh..that Gabrielle...I dislike her extremely! Lmao...another great chapter! :D stupid Gabrielle...
Amanda-et-William chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
lmao...Poor Ron...when he finally wants Draco...he can't even have him...lmao great chapter! :D
Amanda-et-William chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
Aww Ron is falling 4 Draco! :D
Amanda-et-William chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
lmao..hot stuff...lmao...draco wanted a booty call...lmao..I hope things work out!
Amanda-et-William chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
aw another great chapter...it made me hurt 4 ron.. :(
Amanda-et-William chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
lmao! loved the ending of this chapter! :D
Amanda-et-William chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
I love this story...i love Ron's angst...i'm so drawn into it now! :D must continue!
SeraphimeRising chapter 14 . 5/14/2009
I hope you haven't given up on this story
Epiphany Rising chapter 14 . 7/14/2008
If there is anything right and decent in the world you will come back and finish this story.

It is by far my favorite FanFiction EVER... And I can't believe you just left everything hanging for so long... It's be over a year!

But other than my tendency to be a drama queen serious please come back and write more soon. It was a great storyline and VERY well written. The quality of writing was better than any FanFic I've read to date. This one is definitely going into my favorites and I looking forward to reading it again (especially if you update).

Much love to your skills and you,

Sara
laffertyluver23 chapter 14 . 1/19/2008
i'm surprised i haven't already reviewed your story, but anyway- love it! An ending would be nice...!
Purplehonor chapter 14 . 8/24/2007
this is a wonderful story, please update soon! Is Draco trying to find the research for Ron's family - is that why he's marrying that horrible girl? Please update! How is Ron going to break it off with Hermione?
Lemon Wine chapter 14 . 8/20/2007
Great job~!
JaceDamian23 chapter 13 . 7/20/2007
aww please come back soon:(
JaceDamian23 chapter 14 . 7/17/2007
“The floor? You know he’ll never sleep on the floor,” Ron laughed. “He can make his own bed, couldn’t he?”

lmfao that is true haha

“Yes. We we’re just rehashing the moment when Hermione punched you in the face,” Harry laughed.

“Ah yes, the lucky punch,” hissed Draco taking a sandwich from Hermione.

“Lucky? Humph, lucky my butt,” cackled Hermione

haha OMG I LOVED that punch llol

“Oh, don’t rush on my account Granger. I’m only here for the food. You know Harry can’t cook.”

lol

The laughter Ron had so far managed to sustain burst from his mouth in a loud mocking cackles. The look on Malfoy’s face didn’t help quench his laughter; if anything it made it worse. Draco, who was normally put together; the epitome of gentry was now covered in soot from head to toe. His abnormally perfect blond mane was now disheveled and unkempt and now stood on end. This too was masked in black soot. That Malfoyish grimace had returned to his face at the outbreak of Ron’s mocking laughter.

“What…happened?” said Ron when the initial shock began to fade.

“If you must know, I was cooking.” Draco sneered as he wiped the soot from his face with the back of his filthy hands. When he recognized this, he cursed under his breath and turned to sit at the now disheveled table.

“More like trying to cook if you ask me,” smiled Ron.

“I didn’t.”

“Well, no food tonight then?” Ron joked as he placed the roasted pot in the dish pan.

“Oh, ha ha,” said Draco as he went to wash his hands. “There’s fruit in the refrigerator. If you want that, help yourself, unless you know how to cook?”

“I’m probably worse off than you.” Ron crossed to the refridgerator and pulled out two apples. He threw one to Malfoy who started eating it hungrily.

“We’re horrible,” Ron laughed again as he took his sit again at the table.

lmfao that is so funny. i loved it

Draco rolled onto his side looking down at Ron. He didn’t say anything immediately but lifted the covers and looked under. Ron looked at him quizzically as he did this. It was pretty odd.

“What are you doing?” he asked eyeing Draco suspiciously.

“I’m trying to see if you’re enjoying this,” he said raising an eye as he examined the surprising display under the covers. “You aren’t gay are you?” he asked accusingly.

“What? No, I’m not gay,” said Ron as he snatched the covers from Draco’s grasp and lowered them over himself. “Why would you think that?” he asked.

Draco didn’t answer as he laid on his back looking up at the ceiling once again. Ron huffed loudly at his side making Draco laugh out loud.

“Don’t take it personally Weasley. You’re not the first to jump sides after a glance at my arse.”

“WHAT! I didn’t look at your ass,” yelled Ron sitting completely up and staring down at Malfoy. “What made you think that I was looking at your ass?”

“Well, who wouldn’t?” Draco joked.

“I wouldn’t thank you,” hissed Ron

haha omfg HILARIOUS lmfao..i cant believe that draco did that haha

“I graduated from Hogwarts and all I got was this stupid tee shirt

*snorts* that sounds kinda like ron hahah

“What?” Ron asked. Draco answered by looking down at his arm and then back at Ron. Ron pulled his arm free, entirely horrorstruck by the fact that he had been holding Draco’s arm the entire timee since they landed. His cheeks flushed a shade of crimson as he stepped away from him.

llol

aww that waiter had a crush on ron so cute lol

“Ronald? Don’t call me Ronald. You sound like my mother…” his sentence trailed off as he looked down at his fingers. Tears began to swell in his eyes though he tried his hardest to suppress them

aww poor ron:(

Ron rubbed a hand across his pants pocket and it dawned on him that he didn’t have any money at all, muggle or wizard. He looked up sheepishly which made Draco laugh.

LOL

Ron nodded as he eyed Draco’s arm. Draco saw this and he couldn’t help but comment.

“I know you know how to get there don’t you,” Draco laughed making Ron’s entire face flush.

lmfao

Draco pulled Ron’s shirt up and over his head before throwing it over an empty chair. He dropped to his knees before him and unbuttoned his pants. Ron’s eyes widened as Draco undid each button yet he didn’t stop him. Draco tugged lightly, getting Ron’s pants down with his help. He draped them over the chair as well and then turned to pull back the bed covers. Ron’s eyes followed him as he loosened the covers around the bed and then climbed in. Ron looked down at his self and realized that he only had on his boxers. He looked toward the closet and debated whether he should take the trip to get them. Exhaling, he turned and climbed into bed beside Draco who lay looking up at him.

aw draco undressing ron is a soft and loving way. that was so adorable

“That wasn’t his fault. It was that girl. She’s trying to steal him from me.”

lmfao funny i think its adorable how she likes ron

“Well you deserved. How dare you accuse me of seducing you?” said Ron scowling.

“Ah, but you wanted to.” Draco cackled again.

lol

I hate you; you do know that, don’t you?”

“No, actually I think you like me and you’re too stubborn to admit it,” Draco answered as he leaned downed beside Ron.

Ron looked down into his face and laughed. “Does everyone have to be captivated by you?”

“No, but you are,” Draco smiled.

loll

“Well, you don’t use that,” he looked down at it again, “to eat, do you?”

Draco huffed loudly and moaned just as irritably. He crossed over to Ron and taking the boxes from his grasp and placing them back on the chair, pulled him back to the bed. “Just hunch me then,” he whispered into Ron’s ear has he sat down, letting Ron straddle him. Ron looked down into his face and grinned.

“I don’t even know how to hunch,” he laughed.

“Well, I’ll help you.” Draco smiled. He reached a hand down to unbutton Ron’s pants when they both heard talking and footsteps coming from downstairs.

“We’re home,” yelled Hermione from below.

Draco huffed loudly and cursed. Ron laughed heartedly and stood from the bed. “Well, you better get downstairs then.” Ron laughed.

“I, my little friend, am going to the bathroom to relieve myself.

lol aw poor draco

“Who wants to study a muggle if all they eat is salad and soup,” Ron retorted his eyebrows raised

lol

aww draco got jealous and hurt...and herm kinda forced ron to have sex. poor draco

So, this means you want to be my boyfriend?” she asked blocking his attempt to close the door.

“Um, I’m already taken,” he laughed at her eager face. She looked stunned as the color drained from her face.

“It’s that girl isn’t it?” she asked angrily.

“Um, yes,” Ron replied, not having the slightest clue who she was talking about. “Yes, it’s that girl.”

aww poor kid. wow ron is dumb. of course its mione

ron has no right to be jealous...he fucked herm and got with her not caring if draco was hurt...

“Well, you missed your chance mat,” Harry laughed patting Ron on his shoulder. Ron only smirked

lol

“It’s okay I guess. I’m happy to say that there aren’t any “Draco Malfoy’s” in my classes.”

lol

“I love you Ron.” She whispered as she drifted off to sleep.

“I love you too Hermione…,” he said as a tear broke through his defenses and flowed down his cheeks.

“I love you Draco,” he thought as he too drifted off to sleep.

wow icant believe he siad that

“I look like a strawberry,” Ron grimaced as he yanked the shirt over his head and threw it onto the growing pile of jumbled clothes on the floor.

lmfao yummy

Draco caught Ron’s eye and they couldn’t help but smile despite the uncomfortable situation between them. Two girls were fighting over them and that was very rare

you two are so horriable. i mean forget about that bitch gabrille...mione is both of your friend...rons best friend and girlfriend and they are cheating together on her...how heartless are they. assholes lol and its funny cuz draco didnt stick up for her

“Bubble bath,” Ron said. Harry had given him the password

LOL..cute

“I may add that you raped me,” she cried realistically. “He’ll kill you for that.”

“You wouldn’t dare?” Ron spat turning completely around. His pulse was racing. He couldn’t believe this was happening to him.

“Why shouldn’t I?” she laughed sharply as she stood. “I’m the victim in this all.”

She propped one leg up on a chair and raised her cum covered fingers. She smiled wickedly and wiggled them before sliding them into herself.

Ron watched as she smeared his sperm on her inner thighs. The small bit that was left she licked away before cackling menacingly.

“If you keep your mouth shut, I won’t say a word. If you decide to spoil everything and tell anyone; even that little girlfriend of yours…” her eyes grew teary once again. “I’ll become poor raped girl all over again,” she pouted.

holy fucking shit. what a crazey whorish lunatic. poor ron.

“You’re wearing my shirt,” he smiled smoothing the cloth down over Ron’s chest.

“So, you’ve noticed?” Ron joked.

lol

i thing that i dont like is ron didnt actually tel draco that dracos gf forced hand job him

“Get up,” she yelled hitting Ron over the head with her wand. “Don’t you have any manners,” she snapped.

lmfao..shes such a bitch. especially to ron

and draco not warning ron about proposing to gabrilla was kinda heartles.e ven if its just a game and not real...poor ron

“Ron, believe me. She isn’t who I want to be with.”

Ron shrugged and stood from the bed. Grabbing his pants and shirt he moved to the other side of the bed. “Prove it,” he said coldly, his back turned so Draco couldn’t see the hurt written on his face.

your one to talk ronald...your stil with mione. your the one who is the reason of this mess. he was hurt from that first kiss..and you never went after him!

“Probably sat on him,” Ron whispered under his breath. He had to pat Hermione’s back to keep her from choking as she laughed. Harry hid his laughter by holding a napkin over his mouth.

LOL

“She is not a girl and you will not address her as such,” Ron yelled across the table.

*snorts* then what is she? haa

aw that toast is sad. i fel so bad for ron. *sighs* though he is so heart broken and loves draco so much and he's not left hermione yet. i cant believe he's treating his besty that way. so heartless of him. and draco also cuz mione was always good to draco.

anyway i love your story and im excited for more. please come back

angela
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