great story.

this is getting exiting, when are you thinking about continuing?

You shud really keep going with this story , you have great potantual ! I would love to see an update soon !

This is really amazing! I love the story so far, even though there are some very...sad moments but I guess it does fit well with the story and how Sakura and Hinata had even stayed out of the village in the first place.

Is there going to be an eventual pairing?

Please update soon!

UPDATE!

what going to happen next

OMG so cool i vote shikasaku and naruhina

first off please! sasusaku! now to vent my anger!

STUPID HYUUGA CLAN! HINATA COULD HAVE ENOGH POWER TO SLAUGHTER ALL OF YOU! AND W/ SHADOW CLONES TOO! you stupid people! DIE HANABI! DIE!

I loved this chapter. I started to cry when Hinata confronted Hiashi, it was so sad.

Kya !Neji! Woohoo! Awesome! And i wud like to see more NaruXHina fluff! Woots!

it's been months. please update soon.

I Like it a lot! Please update Even In Death!

what a great chapter! as for sakura...sasuke should feel some of the darkness inside her and see it in her eyes so he challenges her to a fight and asks her what she plans to do now that she has come back. she could plan on becoming an Anbu captin and she starts to withdraw farther after her failure to get hinata back into her clan as the leader, and hinata and sasuke tag team to get her back...but if i had more time i could probably come up with something better...i hope that sparked a bit of creativeness atleast...

-Akumu

Great chapter! I never thought of something like that. That's an original idea about Hinata. I hope to see more of Sakura in the next chapter, she was lacking in this chapter.

Awesome chapter! I hope the Hyuuga clan dies. And I can't wait for Hinata to kill Hanabi. She better kill Hanabi. I hate Hanabi.

Only one thing I really want to point out is the switching point of views. In one sentence, you'll have a narrator talking (so it'll be in third person) but in the next sentence, you'll have Hinata narrating in her point of view. It's sort of confusing and kind of annoying. I just thought I'd point that out for you :D (Just as an example, here:

This also left time to pursue Naruto, but her heart wasn’t in it anymore. Sure, she desired to be with the blonde fool, but she just felt hollow and dank. She felt as if they had won, who was she kidding they did win. She saw their smirks as they saw her leave the estate, but on the positive note. The rumor of there being conflict within the main branch was music to my ears.

Apparently, my leaving is a black mark of shame upon the house, and there are the ones who have discovered I’m in the bingo book. They want to clam that the fighter came form their, oh so noble house. Yet, there are the ones who were only too glad to be rid of me. Yet between all that she hadn’t heard a peep form daddy dearest, not that she expected it.

You have, "She saw their smirks as they saw her leave the estate" and then in the next paragraph, you have, "Apparently, my leaving is a black mark of shame..." )

Okay, well, please update soon! I absolutely love this story.