Reviews for First Command
Brievel chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
As soon as I saw Wes and Hobbie were the other two pilots accompanying, I knew it was gonna get good. xD
Blank-101 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Hey look wha tI found - I can't believe I've never read this before! It was only it's addition to the new community that made me find it :D

It was reallly great! Believe it or not, I read it by simply linking from a FF.N post, and didn't even notice the writer until I'd finished and thought , 'I *have* to review this - it's great!'

As ever you get the characters absolutely spot-on, both in their types and backgrounds, and their ages at that point in time. You always inhabit their world colorfully and drop me right in there, especially with banter between the Rogues.

Really nice to come across a little treat like this - made me grin :D
Mireilles3 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Lol :) what a funny ficlet :) and what a cute mistake for our former farmboy :) loved everything, from the characterizations to the predicaments to the quality of the writing :)

Awesome! Thanks for sharing!
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
A great story. Very funny.
kataja chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
I read this story two years ago - when I was still too shy to make any reviews - and it has been one of my absolute favourites ever since! It's so adoringly simple (in the best sense of the word), hilariously funny and young Luke is nailed perfectly with all his faults and charm! I just love the banter between the Rogues - and the rising respect and affection they feel for their commander.

A short story can't get much better than this!
Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Hahaha that was a very funny ending. I definitely loved your perspective on Luke's first time swimming and his first time as a commander! Wonderful :)
Lissa Strawberry chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
I love your writing. Thanks very much for the needed laugh! :)
Manie chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
It's funny ! Without the fact that I don't love Luke very much, the story made me laught, Wes Wedge and Hobbie, a great team, hope you'll write more about them !
camcalli chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Wonderful story. I love reading about the little things our favorites heroes are doing when they're not out saving the galaxy...
jedi71 chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
LOL, poor Luke I can't swim either. Great job. 7one
Lady Elora chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Oh that was FUNNY! Holy Cow...I think I might have wet my pants! I LOVE LUKE! *huggles favorite Jedi* GO CUTE FARMER BOY! Excellent...truly marvelous. I look forward to more of your work! And your Journey of Discovery Trilogy was fantastic. Bravo!

**Allora**
Mirkwood chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Hey! Great story here. I love your depiction of the Big Three, Wedge, Wes, and Hobbie. Nice job. Hope to see more of this.