| Reviews for Diary of a Heartbreak |
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   kayleigh101 chapter 18 . 10/20/2011 plz put another chapter up it really good |
| anonamus chapter 18 . 10/22/2006 that was wonderful |
| Kiarra chapter 18 . 7/30/2006 Here is a review. I love your whole story but please put up your next chapter. MY mom won't let me write my first romance story until I finish reading your story I have a brilliant story too. But not as brilliant as yours though. please put up your next chapter! |
| Kiarra chapter 8 . 6/28/2006 Dear author, I like your story so far. I am only at the 9th chapter though. If I may make a suggestion that you talk a little more about Draco Malfoy. I am a person who likes him and I feel really sorry for him. Not that he has to stay in Gryffindor but, that from reading the story, that no one has paied him any attention. Just a thought though. I would like the story to end out good. Not bad and heart breaking. Not that your story is bad. I really think that you are like a mini J.K. Rowling. |
| monti chapter 18 . 6/20/2006 u r a bad girl woddi! put da final chapter up or i will kill u. skool 2moro! so u wont even live 2 c da holidays! oh, and by da way u owe me 3 mints! :) monti :P |
| MissIceDragon chapter 18 . 6/15/2006 I loved it the only thing i could comment about would be that you had harry and ginny get married first i would have had ron and Hermionie go first because they where first to get back together, first to get engaged and then they are second to marry it just doesnt quite make sence any way i did really enjoy the story please please hurry on the rest of it it really rocks! and just as a peice of adjice i think you might be better off keeping the chapters longer and making a little less chapters because i once read a fanfic that had 149 chapters and the stuff could have easily fit into 30 so thats just some freindly advice and remember i dont critisize i give opinions and advice thanx for reading my reveiw your on my fav. author list and your story made my fav. stories list congratz i say that cause i am very picky! thanx again Kayla/Grizgirl |
| mean titan chapter 18 . 6/15/2006 Wow another great chapter update soon. |
| bee90 chapter 18 . 6/15/2006 Lol, great chapter. McGonaggal with blue hair? Nice Update soon! (Please?) Paige |
| macaday me a nut chapter 18 . 6/15/2006 ha! You are mean! I knew you had it in you somewere deep...deep...DEEP down. Your laptop crashed? The things I don't know...or don't listen to...either or, but...yeh...coolies. Im bored...but I better do my homework. C u at school! Macaday me a nut (and your one too!...definately!) |
| bee90 chapter 17 . 5/10/2006 like i said before... sequel! ok, so thats three votes for sequel, and they all count because they were on different chapters lol you've written these chapters so well! Update soon! |
| bee90 chapter 16 . 5/10/2006 yay! oh, and another vote for sequel... ;) |
| bee90 chapter 15 . 5/10/2006 sequel! |
| macaday me a nut chapter 17 . 5/9/2006 sweet dude...so how many more chapters do u think there will be? And y werent u at school today! Not happy Jan! Anyway...yeh. Thats what I think. And im going to shut up now. I like grapes. Macaday me a nut(and your one too!) |
| macaday me a nut chapter 16 . 5/9/2006 Lost of describing words in this chapter...good, thats good. Macaday me a nut (and your one too!) |
| faye pierce chapter 8 . 5/9/2006 i definitely want a happy, mushy ending! |
