oh my gods i miss this show and this didn't help asdghkl;

so beautiful! your characterization was spot on, and the pain was raw and evident in your writing.

Ohhhhhhh:) I loved it:) *sobs quietly because feels*

;-; if I had words...

That was...very intense. I found this over on TV Tropes and I'm glad I clicked the link. A beautiful fic.

Thanks for the read!

I think I'm tearing up now... *Goes to curl up and rock herself*

It's such a beautiful view of not really forgetting the lessons learned in the other universe and examining how really scarring they could be. I wish I could say something more intelligent, but writer's block has the best of me right now. :(

Kuh...damn you...you made me cry, me made me cry badly...dammit, the tears won't stop, my heart won't stop aching for Omi, my sadness for Omi and Chase juz wont stop!

this was a great read. and what would probably have happened in the show. i adored the switching perspectives.

SHAKING AND CRYING

SHAKING AND CRYING, I

I WILL LEAVE AN ANON REVIEW UNDER THIS SAME (ALTHOUGH NOT CONNECTED) USERNAME BC ICANT HANDLE MY EMOTIOINS RIGHT NOW SDGPISLKJ

Wow this is really fantastic! Its such a great take on Omi and the burden he carries knowing how the future could've turned out and an alternative universe where he can finally see Chase on the side of good. Really just great work!

Why are you so good at writing? I love how you managed to capture the characters so well. Its almost better than the cartoon itself!

Somehow, having it be ficlets instead of full length works really well. I have to say, this is just all around awesome.

Oh my.. this is beautiful. 3

I like how instead of one large story, you divided it into smaller segments. And I esp like how you interchanged between present and "future" with each segment.

I think you really captured Omi's character well with this, and wow, it was just so deep... amazing work! :)

Would it be pathetic to say I cried because of this? This was beautiful and I really, really loved it.

Awesome. This is very cool. You should continue this.

This really makes me wish you did more Xiaolin Showdown stuff. I cannot describe how much I like it in words. But the non verbal description is series of gurgles, followed by near tears, followed by jumping for joy. Then thats followed by my usual I wish Good Chase was in the show more.