Good story.
unique

Hi,

I just wanted to thank you for your great work. I really enjoyed it. Best whishes from Germany,

André

You did great!

kisses,

hikaru!

He left me to wonder what experiences those might be and continued with his work. And I really wondered what had caused him to grow so bitter... ...He had had his own battles, entire wars, perhaps, and all the time, he had been victorious… and alone.

this is, i think, the best part of the whole fanfic, its perfect.

you dont think of it when you play the game, but this makes you go over the events of Warrior Within in your mind and imagine the Prince as an actual person and what kind of effect it would have on one.

I think this paragraph makes the Prince more human than any scene from the game did, and i mean every bit of that.

And so it ends...not bad, not bad at all. Me likey. _

Nicely wrapped up. I didn't think there was too much you could do with the ending from Farah's point of view. Her thoughts on the future of their kingdoms were very insightful and well done.

Good job.

Great fic. Thank you for finishing it! There are so many fics that are started but never finished. And POP is awesome! I too hope to see more great stories in games and maybe even movies too!

But thank you for sharing your imagination with all us readers!

Ah! Thank you soo much for finishing this story! It was simply AWESOME! The funny thing is, just yesterday, I finished the game for the hundredth time so everything was fresh in my memory as I read your fic. And it's all exact! I sure hope there ARE going to be other games like that! ;)

Argh! Not another cliff hanger! You're so cruel! ;) I know that I know (ah ah, funny!) what's gonna happen, but still, I can't wait to see your side of the story! Please update soon! Don't forget about this fic, it's almost done!

Not bad. I'm playing TT, too. I'm on The King's Road, where you fight the two guards as bosses. They keep killing me, though.

Please update soon.

The narrative is still going strong. I defeinitely liked the bit about the pomegranate innuendo being totally innocent.

Ah, characters that lie to themselves can be either endearing or irritating, but always worth reading about.

Keep up the good works.

I am so glad you updated, The story is finally coming down to it's last few chapters. You must finish this story, it is very well written and gives great insight into how the supporting character is feeling, and that is not something you see very often. Also, I'm a big fan of "The Creator" too, Update that soon as well.

Again, nicely done! I especially liked the way you depicted the Prince's fight against the two sand generals.

Please update soon! )

Finally! Hope you had fun in Europe.

Please update soon

Yes! You're back! :D If only you knew how hard it has been to wait for this updtate! But it's finally here! And, man, it's really good! I understand you had your reasons to make it so long before you updated, but please, next time don't be so hard on us! ;) Thanks again for the best PoP fan fic eva!