This story was an emotional rollercoaster from start to finish. Loved it. It constantly keeps you on your toes and makes you bearthless

You convey emotions in such a raw way, that this chapter nearly brought me to tears. It felt as if I was in a rollercoaster of emotions.

I didnt really understand why Sophie went to visit Georgina and asked her whether Howl ever kissed her and when he told her his name. I thought it was to find some kind of... relief, but these 2 specific questions seemed sudden and unimportant. I didnt really get it. But the chapter was great as always.

I loved this little AU. So, so so much.

What an amazing ride that was. I'm headed straight to the sequel!

Howl is very OOC but this story intrigue me so I m in

What a flaming pair. I'm real glad they became solid true to their characters at the end of this! I had my doubts in the beginning, I confess, but I think uniformly dodged the oocness

Wowwww

That was the strongest ten chapter story I have ever read! How on earth did you manage such poly in so little space? Goodness, if I could write like you, I'm sure I should never complain again! Your writing is so strong and you have such a way with words, I can feel the character's emotions and see what they do. You are truly talented.

That was absolutely adorable. Wonderful job!

Beautiful, quaint (in a good way) prose. Reminds me SO MUCH of the books. Wonderful job!

Sorry for the previous review, my finger slipped.

I wanted to ask if you'd ever consider writing a story from Howl's PoV as I enjoyed you writing that. Also, I really liked how even though Howl didn't love the girls and hurt them, they grew into better woman for it. That was really well thought through. A very enjoyable story. Thank you.

I still really enjoy Howl's pov. Have you c

I'm glad to find out what he said / did with Lissy. I was curious there.

Personally, I think the words in bold at the end could come from both Sophie or Howl which is nice.

Really nicely done writing about the girls. The insight about the shallow, vapid girls needing validation from others and it leading to bullying and the strong woman who knows you have to make things happen yourself if you want them to happen.

I really enjoyed this chapter with all the character growth. Not so much Lissy's accusation about virginity, it didn't seem in keeping. I would have gone with something about him eating her heart which I guess he does figuratively do when he leaves a girl heartbroken.

Howl's appearance was also a little disappointing but I guess he's also had a bit of personal growth we weren't witness too.