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Wow, this first chapter was intense!

This is my new favorite pairing (yeah, I'm a little behind the times) and I really enjoyed this story. As a whole piece, it has a completeness that is very satisfying, and the last line of the second chapter was indeed hilarious.

I still haven't stopped wondering why nobody seems to write Roy/Winry. It may not be the easiest thing in the world, but there's so much delicious angst and ready-made drama that it seems like quite a fan fictional treasure trove to me! Maybe it just seems too easy to write it badly? I think Roy/Winry written badly could be very... bad. But still... I don't know. I guess I'll never understand it.

I loved the way you wrote both Roy and Winry, and how you left the story open-ended enough to allow them at least the possibility of happiness. Very cathartic, and also very nicely written.

Aw, this was sad and hapy/made me want to cry and jump for joy all at the same time. Nice work -

haha that was so well written! Great! I loved the restraint that he showed and when it finally cracked, it made the whole thing better! here, have a cookie!

This is really lovely! The very first fanfic I ever thought about was "What if Roy and Winry...?" I've always thought this was a relationship that should be explored, being vastly more complex than other relationships in this series. Well done! Love the angst, and the fulfillment.

This fic was great. I fully agree on what you said pertaining to the other couples such as Sess/Rin and Kaka/Saku. Roy and Winry need more lovin'.

Whoa hello! I LOVELOVELOVE the RoyXWinry pairing a lot! Woo hoo go you! At least someone agrees with me that they make a GREAT couple! I mean he killed her parents because he was ordered too but yet she can't help but fall in love with him? It's a perfect love story I tell ya! PERFECT!

I think you just turned me into a RoyxWinry fan. I read the uncensored version, and now I think I'm in love with that pairing. The last line was priceless.

If it makes you feel any better, this is the first Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic I have ever read and the pairing I chose was Roy and Winry... -_-

I read both versions of chapter two,The adult version is really good

I loved it! hehe... "Ed would be so pissed if he knew." LMAO! *much roflling ensues* OMG, I never thought of these two together, but it totally makes sense :) LOVE IT!

Ah, this is so good. This definitely deserves more comments :D.

Oh, the little tears in my eyes. How lovely. On to chapter 2 :)

well i love RoyWin as well, so you are not alone! This was a great fic! very well written

I never really thought about how Winry's life isn't all that equivalent. She did lose a lot of people that were important to her, so she definitely needs something really good to happen in return. Yay for the Roy being what she needs!