Very sweet and lovely. Thank you and please continue.

Oh, I wish there was more! What a lovely story.

No more?
This was really enjoyable
Thank you

This was really lovely.
Well written and evocative of the inner thoughts of a quiet man.
Made me want to go on
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Absolutely loved this story! The character constructions were accurate - How sad it won't be continued :(

Goodness! This lovely story is well written:)
How sad that it is no longer updated :(

I have greatly enjoyed the story so far, the progression is as gradual as one would hope and suits with the style of the story very well. I very much look forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for that!

Please continue. :)

Like it!

I really enjoyed this story. It's exactly the kind of Brandon/Marianne story I love. I wish you could have finished it but I understand, having written a few stories myself, that sometimes other things come up. Very lovely story.

I particularly liked the intimate yet relaxed feel between Brandon and Marianne. It's hard to explain why exactly; it just works wonderfully.

Though it has been years by the looks of it since you had worked on this story, what are the chances of you continuing it? The reason I ask is a simple one: your work focuses on the my two favourite Austen couples (as I prefer Col. Brandon to Darcy any-day)and the courtship that I think was poorly neglected - but that is what fanfics are for. And there is also the fact that I feel all squrimy, and giddy and am awing again when I read this.

I LOVE IT!

could you lease please update this. I love this story! it's so nice to read this as this is similar to how i pictured their relationship at the end of the film. I know it's been so so long since ur last update but please contiune, for me? :) xxx

Oh...I am so sad that you stoped there! damnit

I love your descritions! especially The 'doubted second love! Thats perfect! I myself am looking for that second love and it hit quite a cord!