Huh... that was really well done. Ties into the plot real nice. Great writing!

Love it! The timing, the final punch line, briliantly crafted and well polished!

That was hot! I usually read Mal/Simon but Jayne/Simon is just as good. I felt like you really wrote the characters with the right personality. There's not enough well written Firefly fan fiction out there so thank you!

Oh my God. So good. Lol I loved this SO much.. You described it really really well. And the end made me smile. Great job!

I lovelovelove this. There are no words. Most in character i've ever read of this pairing.

This was fun... and very in character, I could hear them saying it. Really, really good.

I loved this, great stuff! This pairing can be tricky to write convincingly, but you did an awesome job. Thanks for the shiny story!

Absolutely hilarious. You have a real flair for dialogue. The balance between intense and serious and highly amusing is upheld brilliantly. Both Jayne and Simon are very in character. I especially liked Jayne's 'own solution' to Reavers and Simon's questioning of his own sanity.

Wow. Wow! I actually love this. I really kind of want a sequel... I must tell you. Sequel! :D Well done though, I loved the serious feel of it, it made Jayne believable. Thanks for this!

you need to make a next chapter!

This was a delightful read, thanks so much for sharing!

Oh! I loved it! I do hope it's continued, or that you wrote more fics like this. The bad thing about them is that they're always so damned short, lol

Haha, this was good.

Yum! Now that's a deliciously in-character bit of PWP. Very, very glad to find it - it's a good mix of bouncing the characters off of each other and just plain hot.

Hahahaha! that wuz awesome! i loved it ! :) Jayne is hilarious!