Nicely done! I liked the idea behind to fire demon and they really handled a bad situation pretty well.

That was one scary demon! My heart was racing as I was reading!

Great story, I enjoyed it!

This was rec'd at Live Journals SPN Storyfinders- so glad it was- a great read! :)

Sweet. I know this is old, but I still liked it so thought I'd tell ya.

Great story. :) The characterization was spot-on and narrative is still wonderfully descriptive while still keeping a fast pace. Like another reviewer said, I could picture everything in my mind. And in my book, that's the mark of excellent prose. And...methinks I recognize the technical knowledge of another person in the gasoline industry. ;)

This was such a great read! I loved the details of the gasoline incident. Amazing job!

oh i love the sam angst! poor sammy! that was great-can you please update son!

I just found this story and had to leave a review for it because I liked it so much! Excellent writing and characterisation.

Great job!

Wow! This wwas really well writ4een. Fast paced; wonderful imagery. I could see everything that happened.

Thanks for sharing

Amy

This was fantatsic! Fast-paced and exciting - I could see all the motion happening. Great descriptions, great ride! Thanks for posting

This was really great

that was great i love it write something else soon.

This was a great story. It is an interesting story. I loved it. You did a great job. I wish you didn't end it her. Great story

You certainly fired up (no pun intended) my imagination with this great one-piece! Loved the freshness and fluidness of action and dialogue and the way you married the angst and medical terminology perfectly. Delicious read, so please pen some more soon.