This is really really interesting. I really hope you will continue this story.

Really hope to see an update soon!

Ello. I am reading this again by accident. But now that I remember this fic, plz continue! I remember this fic again!

Don't be like all the other fics!

;_;

plz?

-TTFN

OMG! Aerith/Aeris(sp?)is about to get runned over! CONTINUE SOON PLZ!

Hi its xaio, only now I'm kimi where is the rest of it? I like Vincent too, he and Sephiroth are my favorite characters. Please continue this story, as I will add it to my favorite and alert list.

I love it, I think you did Vincents character perfectly and the story is well paced and makes you want to know more. again it is very well written I look forward to your new chapters.

AHAHAHAHAHA! I feel so stupid. I thought I was rereading chapter one and you changed it some, then I started getting really confused and was getting kinda mad that you'd change the first chapter so much. Then I read about how Cloud was getting revenge for Zack I'm like, "Wait a minute..." I looked back to the top to see what chapter it was and saw that it was chapter 2. I felt so stupid. Haha. Alright, I'm loving the story. I understand why Aerith wants to save him know. - Go Vincent! Way to blow up that box! Lol. Hojo's a bastard. Sorry for the language. That dream was somewhat confusing. Was Vincent having a nightmare about his guilt for killing Cloud's mother? I think he was! Oh! Hurray for the blonde! What now? I hope Cloud doesn't run into Aerith. I hope Nanaki doesn't kill Fenrir. Haha. I can't wait until next chapter. See you then. Arigato! -

Kikino

really good chapter! i wish vinny remenber more of aerith!

Very good chapter/ Very suspenseful. Some grammatical errors that i won't go into right now... maybe, if you ask on my rpg...

Update soon...

Got to back to my homework.

Neo-kun

Oh. I like it. I hope to read another chapter from you soon. So, Cloud wants hime dead, Aerith wants to save him, and Hojo wants to use him. I HATE HOJO! I wonder how this is gonna work out. I hope to get an update soon. Arigato! -

Kikino

A veyr intresting story, I must say. I ahve never seen the Final Fantasy anime nor played the games and if they have a manga, I've never read that either.

Anyways, I loved your story so far. You have beautiful description, I must say.

there are a few things that i think may make your writing better. You don't have to make a new paragraph, everytime that you have a new sentence. A paragra[h is a group of sentences with the same though.

You should defintely contine this story, though I've nevr read from this genre, I'll love to read it.

If you having a hard time with getting reviews then you should email those whom you always review the stories of and tell them what it is about and the genre of the story.

You seem to have a great thinking process going on with your head to amke a story of greatness with that as a way to start. I was defintely kept in suspense!

i will try to look this up so I could learn more about because I can't really help you with ideas or anything because of my cluelessness about the games though i heard that they are veyr interesting games.

poor Zach got shot and I was liking Zach and his fun personality.

You should read my story 'Fiery Rose'

Very interesting title... remind me of 'Romeo must die' LOl

limit your paragraph lines.. or else people won't be able to read them and in every time people start to talk, use that paragraph for their dialogue

You know, actually, if you fix the paragraph lines that you may get more reviews because people may assume that you are just having people talk an there's no description though you plenty of description. Like, usually, if I am looking through a fic and I noticed that Its a new paragrph eveyr sentence... then I assume they are just having people talk and no description at al so i don't read it.

I didn't really check to see if there were mistakes and usually I 'd tell you on the review but its pretty late so i won't make this a veyr long review

Anyways, i loved your fighting scene and the suspense taht is shown through this chapter.

i was surprised by the god-like ststue and it kep me awake adn interested.

I hope to see your next update soon! :D

thank you for inviting me to read this.

You shouild defintely read my stories!

please make another chapter it's so good!

Hahaha(laughs)! Vincent's going to hell? This will be intersting. Please keep writing!