| Reviews for New World, New Life |
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   nayin17 chapter 25 . 5/5/2016 Okay |
| HPCullen chapter 26 . 12/1/2012 Intriguing story. Can't wait to read part 2. Thank you for sharing. HPCullen |
| wingedangel791 chapter 25 . 11/2/2012 Interesting story! |
| hg chapter 1 . 1/25/2012 do you know what 'unmerciless' means? |
| HPismyhero31 chapter 8 . 3/16/2010 Wel...um I liked the chapter, there all a bit short but meh it's still good LOL anyway Ginny's eyes are BROWN not BLUE! It's her most striking feature besides her hair for Harry and I think it is something important to get correct in one's fic. |
| teachergirl chapter 5 . 9/8/2008 I'm sorry, but I just don't buy Ron giving Harry advice on his love life. Ginny invited Dean to Harry's homecoming and nobody bothered to tell Harry? Surely one of his best friends should have told him what to expect! With friends like that who needs enemies! I'd rather take my chances with Draco. At least you know he's going to screw with you. |
| victoria chapter 3 . 6/21/2008 'Jumping quickly out of bed, Ginny grabbed from her wardrobe jeans that showed off her long legs...Her body was curvaceous and she had long, slender legs...' you do have a thing for ladies with long slender legs.. im not letting you off just yet.. |
| shellsboy24 chapter 3 . 5/8/2008 great story |
| abcd chapter 12 . 2/6/2008 Appachio, first off I just want to say that your story is intriguing and has an interesting plot. I look forward to seeing how it turns out. However, you grammer, to say it bluntly, is terrible. I imagine that it will get better as the story progresses, but I suggest that you use a beta reader in the future. Also, at the end of this chapter you had harry 'looking into Ginny's blue eyes', while in chapter three,she was described as having chocolate coloured eyes. (Unless you eat blue chocolate. haha) Anyways, keep up the good work. |
| shellsboy24 chapter 10 . 4/17/2007 great story |
| spaz-face chapter 5 . 4/17/2007 Your story seems to have an interesting plot so far, but the wording is really awkward. There are a lot of places where you are repeptitive or you have an awkward use of the passive voice. You might want to consider getting a beta, because grammar mistakes can take away from the flow of your story. Other than that, this is pretty good! -spaz- |
| shellsboy24 chapter 6 . 4/16/2007 great story |
| hemotem chapter 26 . 3/1/2007 Great Story |
| Hamm On Wry chapter 3 . 10/15/2006 Hm... Something tells me that you are into long, slender legs... So far, so good. |
| Sparkle Tangerine chapter 26 . 8/29/2006 WOW! I am in AWE of your imagination! I love this story! I imagine it as a mix between james Bond, Indiana Jones, and (Of Course HP! keep up the good work! *S~T* |
