| Reviews for Pen and Sword |
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willowswelt chapter 1 . 11/15/2012 Thnaks for this snippet. I liked all the interpretations of handwriting. Best sentence in my opinion: Once again, it was confirmed to the Prime the uniqueness of the mechs that he had the privilege of commanding. For the most part they were not soldiers but ordinary civilians who's lives had stopped in mid motion when the call to arms had sounded. Would be interesting to know if Megatron could see the same in his troops. |
teh blumchenkinder chapter 1 . 5/7/2008 Wow... I've had this on my faves for a while, and I'm just now reviewing! I'm such a slacker! Anyway. I like your personality sketches- and I like it even more because it's from a single pov- Prime's! (squee) Writing is such a part of human life- at least, for people on this website- and it gets pushed aside so often... I love each and every bit of this story, but especially the bit about the twins writing everything in beautimous calligraphy. - Also: "but ordinary civilians who’s lives" who's whose. Looks funny, but I think that's right. |
nolongerherexxxx chapter 1 . 3/29/2008 What an interesting way to think about the characters and refer to them. I really enjoyed this. |
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 1/11/2008 Aww! What a cute, little fic about the Autobots' writing and how Optimus muses over them. |
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 11/30/2007 I like this snippet. :) |
PrettyArbitrary chapter 1 . 5/30/2007 Very cool. I love the little look into Prime's head, and the look at the other Autobots from someone else's perspective. |
Kenya Starflight chapter 1 . 1/19/2007 Oh, I like this. Very cool. Handwriting can tell a lot about a person, can't it? |
Lady Razorsharp chapter 1 . 10/9/2006 This is certainly a little jewel of a moment. |
Inkfamy chapter 1 . 8/8/2006 RE: Sweet. A nice look into Prime's head. Definitely sweet. |
The Starhorse chapter 1 . 6/8/2006 There is something about this fic that I just think is so great. You're so spot on with everyone's characterizations with this, and I especially love Ratchet's 'crabbed' glyphs. So him, and such a good play on words. :) And what made you think to write the twins as having such graceful handwriting? I'd never thought of it, but I totally dig that concept. It's so them somehow. I love it. |
PuraJazzBot chapter 1 . 3/1/2006 Aw i like this one D... the descriptions of each one's handwriting styles.. very nice.. you may have even sparked off a fic in me regarding this now.. we'll see what happens |
Super Chocolate Bear chapter 1 . 3/1/2006 Cool. Nice to see Prime doing boring, run of the mill leader things - I personally always liked his basketball hobby. _ The handwriting and the way it reflected the personality of the 'Bot it belonged to was very well observed, and very fitting for the characters; Ratchet was too busy to worry about neat writing, Wheeljack too excited to think about how legible it is. And how I loved the unique turnabout of the Lambo twins. '...the foulest of slurs, insults and swear words elegantly traced on the walls' That part was great. I always enjoy Prime P.O.V stories, mostly because it's hard to get into his head, and thereby making him difficult to sympathise with. But when you've got it, you've got it. And you've got it. |
Tiamat1972 chapter 1 . 3/1/2006 I love how you take the simplest, everyday thing and turn it into a wonderful fanfic. |
Thatredcar chapter 1 . 2/28/2006 yup.. hand writing usually tell's a lot of us.. nice one shot.. gif us more |
Draange chapter 1 . 2/28/2006 That's a nice little one-shot, a snapshot of their everyday lives. I liked the snippet about how the twins wrote curses in caligraphy. |