10 years late but that was amazing Fanfic.
brilliant writing and planning and catching the characters identity so well!

so just Thank you for that.

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Classic and very funny!

You have their voices down pat. I'm quite enjoying this!

Yay! They lived!

Fun! Quick leap onto action with just a bit of background to tell us why the girls are back in LA. Well written to, a good flow without grammer or spelling errors and true to the characters. If I have one slight criticsm I think you meant Amy had a nickle plated Hi-Power rather than a steel plated one to be flashy. Oh and no doubt about an automatic in a 69 Mustang (or any earlier year) being verboten. And that car is perfect for Lucy.

I know I already reviewed this fic, and it's been over four years since you finished, but I just wanted to let you know that it makes me really happy. :) I even reread it, which is something that I rarely ever do with fanfic, especially, a multichapter. Fantastic job!

Great story! Liked the non-stop action and the smartness of it all. Thanks!

I loved this story! It had the perfect mix of action with a little bit of fluffy romance, and got the characters just right. I could easily imagine something similar to this being a debs sequel. You definitely deserve way more reviews than you have. Anyways, great job!

I loved this story. I was so creatively and awesomely written. All the twists and turns and suspense, it was seriously like one of those mystery/adventure books that you just can't put down because you have to figure what the hecks really going on. I loved how it ended and I agree with one of the reviewers who said it's like the Ocean's series. I can't wait to read more of your writing

very nice, gauss. I've gotta say that much - at least. Funny, silly, exciting...it had a lot going for it. Awesome story, and I can imagine Amy's reaction if Lucy had told her she'd just punched Max in the bathroom. Ha.

Loved it.

I loved it! :) Although I can't picture Amy and Lucy being bald. I loved those beautiful locks on their heads!

And what about Janet and Scud? Are they not together in your fic?

Now *THAT* was a cracking way to end a brilliant story! you really had me with the whole "He shot her!" thing, and I had to read the last two chapters twice for it to really click!

WELL DONE, the whole thing was absolutely FANTASTIC :)

Any other DEBS fics in the pipeline? :P

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From first to last, I've loved this. It's extremely well plotted and tightly woven, and all your characters are drawn well. I also very much like the layering of plot, counter plot and counter counter plot!

All in all, a fantastic read, thank you :)