OK, with this fic, you've become a favorite author. Well done, great plot. Still, Dean would write it all down, except for trying to kill Sam. Thanks for writing this.

That was an unusual emotional outburst from Dean. I he let that happen more often he would be healthier for it.

A smiling lizard. Never saw that happen. Good start to a emotional story.

Just came across this. Fantastic story.

well I have definately never read anything like this before. I really enjoyed your story thank you for writing it!

And so the lizard monster things have a name. Lol...I had to laugh with Sam! Yay hopefully Sam can talk some sense into Dean and find out what he thinks he's doing! Onto the next chapter...

well Dean is being silly not telling Sam after all, Sam did save his life and is only trying to help Dean and he will figure out the truth eventually. I do feel sorry for Dean though he has been through a lot!

So I guess they are still more intelligent then other things but I still don't get why Dean is still alive if everyone else was killed...not that I'm complaining Maybe he just put up a really good fight? lol want to know now but I won't finish all this story before I have to go back to work...stupid split shifts! Anyway another good chapter I especially liked the ending of it

hmm. Am wondering why the lizard monsters left Dean alive and so easy for Sam to find but maybe they are not that intelligent lol and thought he was dead so they left him? Anyway its lucky that he is alive otherwise i would have had too stop reading lol, just hope he will get over all of his injuries! Good chapter!

I wonder what monster it was? Looks interesting I never get bored of good supernatural fan fiction lol will read more soon

What a great piece of work! I really enjoyed reading it!

excellent story;me enjoyed it

really good read this under pen name goldenshadows but had to change it problems with my account

Okay, that was just ... wow. You have a wonderful way with words ... you write sentences as if they're poetry. Very beautiful. I actually saw this story as one long poem, more than a story. Might be because I was listening to Jeff Buckley's Hallelujah during most parts ... but I really really liked this. Well done.

I have just read this awesome story for the first time, loved it, couldn't stop reading, stayed up until the wee hours of the morning to finish it. Congratulations on an interesting and enjoyable read, you should write more multi chapter stories, well done.

Silvertayl