Oh! Me likey!

Oh, I like this so far! Daniel dating Jack's daughter? Brave, brave man! And I think Jack would make a great father - QED: you only have to see him with Reetou Charlie in "Show And Tell" to know that.

Hope to read the next chapter soon - maybe during your Spring Break (whenever that is. I'm English and we don't have Spring Breaks).

Adding you to my alert lists ...

Good stuff. I liked that you put the stuff with Apophis in, good way to show the setting without awkwardly taking the time to actually say when this happened. Keep up the good work.

The plot thickens! Good stuff, keep it up.

AW POOR DANNY- REJECTED!He's just not asking the right girls.

::Beckons Daniel Jackson into a storage closet. Grabs Apollo, Helo, Martouf, Jack, Cameron, AND John Crichton for good measure::

Good start! Keep going! It is interesting!

Hm... interesting beginning, do keep this up I'm curious to see where it's heading.

Good chapter.

I like this story, so keep going. I do have a suggestion - you need to explain why she has a different last name...

You characterize everyone great. You have Teal'c down to well, a T. ;-) And the idea that Alexa had a part in Cody's death- tear! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

Nice. I'm enjoying it so far. Jack with a daughter . . . interesting.

Good start.

::Stands up and applauds:: 'Nough said I think. Besides saying: so proud of you for actually posting this.