I realize that when reviewing we're supposed to say something profound but...nothing's coming to be because my mind is overrun with cuteness. So, with that, I shall simply say: D'AWWWWWWWW!

Some really old story, huh?

It looks like it's simply a conclusion of the anime, but still... it has something more to say. (And I'm not speaking of the four-sided box Yuki is, although I laughed my head off at that. XD)

I also noticed that you wrote "Touma" instead of "Tohma" - why did you stick to the other spell, then? (Not as if I didn't like the other one more, because I do prefer "Tohma", but the "Touma" one is the correct one grammatically. ) No offense, just curious.

The other thing I laughed at was "welcome to my first (and probably last) Gravitation fic". How many have you written since that very statement? Over one hundred and eighty drabbles and Perils and other stuff as well... you're amusing me, really.

Although I have to admit I also often make statements like this, then go totally elsehow. (Not as if I will likely have 200 Gravitation stories... still, you're the wonderful one. )

Hm, guess I should finish this - getting way too long for a review.

Yours again (going to read your other stuff as well),

Roni

LOL. Love it. Great story, as always. You are really good at characterization. I can't stand when people make Yuki out to be some rude unfeeling prick. I mean, he tries to keep up that act but he slips enough that observant people should notice. That's one reason I wait a while before writting a fic about a new Anime I've found. You really have to get a good feel for the characters and story before you write about them. I've read so many horrible fics that disgrace Animes. You are one of the people that redeem fanfiction! OK, I'll stop blabbing now...

I HAD READ THIS! holy shite, I did not know you had written it though. Hence the fact that I said you should write a drabble on it. Now everything makes sense to my fogged up brain lawl.

now the question remains why did i not review it? hmm... oh well here it goes,

it was a very nice annalogy on the characters personalities and as always, your last lines are made of golden lockets :)

keep it up

Aw... that was really cute! and a good foretaste of the other drabbles! You really stay true to their characters. I love the fact that Eiri is pictured as fragile and really caring when it comes to sex, and that Yuki describes Shuichi, who could appear like the "weak" one, like someone "very strong", even much stronger than he is himself. That's really how i pictured them, actually. Eiri is my own favourite, and I love the face Shuichi loves "second-most"! "Dammit, i've got a deadline to meet", haha! So Yuki! Well done! :)

That was...simply beautiful. I fell in love with Gravitation after just one episode and while 12 episodes later wasn't satisfying enough, I was worried I'd run into such horrible OOC (particularly in Yuki's case) fanfiction that I almost didn't even want to try. But your story was everything I'd hoped a good Gravi fanfiction would be, and more. Both Shuichi and Yuki's POV described how they feel about the other very accurately, and the words which they used to describe them also suited them. And I'm looking forward to reading many more of your stories. )

cute as always you never seem to dissapoint

aw! so totally and undiniably cute! u should write more to it, make it longer or something...it was just so awesome i want more!

kawaii!

Headaches, deadlines. Yuki's just full of excuses to stop thinking about something even resembling love.

Very nice. You did this very well and approached it in a way that, while not original, is most true to the characters, and a lot of times that's the more important factor.

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I like how this story was written. The style of it. The wording of it. Does that make any sense to you? If so, please explain it to me xD I dunno, it's like you can really understand the characters you write about. Which is a real talent, mind you. I admire that, probably because I can't write to save a life. P Very cute, somewhat fluffy, with a serious tiny intense flavor to mix. Loved it D

Good story! :D -faves-

Ahw, so as you recommended, I read this story too. And I couldn't avoid reviewing it, it was just too well done. It gave me butterflies (as your other did) and made me giddy (like the other). I don't know what it is about the way you write stories that just .. ooh wee, it makes me contemplate the whole thing about love.

Actually, Gravitation as a whole does that to me. I adore finding a writer that doesn't ruin the manga/anime for me. I've kind of avoided reading FanFiction to do with the story because I don't want my opinions and love for it to be .. mutilated. But your stories have captivated my interest in a way that might pry me away from just focusing on just the original story.

Congrats on another wonderful one-shot.