Actualizado: 22 de marzo de 2006 . Han pasado años la verdad. Me gusto esos capítulos.

I'm glad naomi solved the case, but at what cost?

the thing that always bothered be about death note is that criminals are still people too and it's wrong to just kill them like that

I will be honest with you, at first the story was interesting until they grabbed the notebook. Now I have completely lost any interest in this story.

It was really great to see some Naomi fic! She really was one of the best characters, despite her brief appearance.

I really feel bad for Misa, but in a way, I think dying was what she wanted.

You know, Naomi would be the /only/ woman in the squad, so I had expected that in this timeline, Naomi would have been the one assigned to watch Sayu's room.

This is the story I needed to read, it was such a waste that Namoi died so early!

Short but very interesting, definitely liked the small divergence. Would have liked the read more about how Light would have tried to survive but this worked very well.

Great story :) Sad ending but a fun read. I really wish Naomi had a bigger part in the series maybe Light would have been brought down sooner.

Wow, you really did some research when you wrote this.

Some of my works have direct dialogue from the original.

I like it so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Difference in timezones? We (in Australia) are a day ahead of America, and 2 hours different from Japan. So Sunday might have been the 20th there.

Oh this is delicious! Delicious plotting, and I just love the way 30 minutes could change everything! Great job, I just love plotting D

Thanks for writing this alternate ending, and I think the L/Naomi was done realistically. Good job!

Just finished the story, and I thought it was pretty good. It more or less would have gone the way you wrote had Naomi never had her fatal encounter with Light. That being said... I really wanted Light to win D: I really like him. XD Oh well.

Though, I do think Rem was kind of out of character, letting Misa die. She really cared about her, and I figured she would have written the names of every policeman, judge, and anyone who would threaten her before letting Misa face a death sentence, but other than that, good story.

On another note, I would have been curious to see more about how Light's family felt about him being back home under surveillance, and how they felt when he was arrested for being Kira along with Misa. I really wanted to know what they were thinking, especially, Sayu. I'm sure his mother would have been more or less along the lines of how his father felt, to some extent, but I'm sure Sayu would have felt totally different; conflicted, and confused.

Ah, well, in the end it was a good story.