Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Up to chapter 8. I'm really confused as to why Vargas didn't finish off Sheppard while he could to take Sheppard to the Genii for a reward.
I totally would have. iP
Vargas must have other plans.
ooooo. What's going to happen.

Chapter 6:
I couldn't really tell that this changed scenes at first..
Teyla sighed. "I believe we have a problem."
The light filtering down through the canopy shifted from tiny little white slants directly overhead...
But hey, if that's the only thing that jumps out at me, then this story must be SO amazing XD

LMAO I loved your opening phrase so much. Very Rodney McKay to detail a weapon's specs and then dismiss it as worthless because it didn't suit HIS needs. Lol.

Thank you for this enjoyable little tale. It was quite well thought out and executed. You write the characters in an exemplary fashion. Thanks you again.

He is worse than Jesse the six year old I babysit.

I loved it, delightful action, wonderful whump, and some great humor too.

Great story. One quibble: you think XP was more stable than 95?

Fantastic! I loved all of it!

Great story! Nicely written!

That was cool - thanks.

Excellent dynamic between Sheppard and McKay :)

thanks

Wow, I really enjoyed reading your story. It was fantastic! You're an awesome writer, I think I'm gonna go look at more of your fics...keep up the good work!

YAY! rodney is saved from the furious, insane, and sometimes horny bounty hunter and lives to see another day! YAY!

ASOTA

oh my ! i really thought he had killed sheppard... i was reading and comating but that and the end with the funny dialogues woke me up... and thus a little review