heartbreaking

Oh dear holy god in hell...

K, I've been prowling your page, and I'm stunned. You manage to perfectly capture the bittersweet. I love it, because it's mostly so believeably in character as well- it's rare to find.

If this is what you write when you're insane... god, I'm going to be glued to my computer for hours.

That was so beautiful and heartbreaking.

That story is probably one of the few I have read, where being written in Kakashi's point of view, fit the mindset and the emotions of the character to perfection. Great job.

oh my god, that was so sweet! i liked the flow of it, poor confused Kashi. hehe. i loved it!

I really liked this story. It was very beautifully written. thank you for sharing it!

Oh, god... *speechless* This is like, no, it IS, the most awesome, beautiful, romantic, impressing story I ever read and I probably ever will. I normally don't like this 'kind of writing' (I prefer 'real' stories, with an adventure and stuff... Please don't take this wrong.) But this just left me all silent inside, and that doesn't happen much. I can just feel the love, the sadness, the whole story running through my blood. I can't even cry because it's so touching. I think I'm going to read this over and over again, and find myself staring at my computer in complete awe and silence over and over. The whole 'design' (weird way to put, I know) is just so wonderful. Over and over again those words and then how he'd feel. It's just so... perfect. There isn't an other word I can find for it. Thanks to you story I'm trying something like this too. You really made my day and a part of my life. I can barely believe people are able to write like this. To make up such a beautiful, deep story. I cannot put my love for your story in words, but I tried.

Good luck with all your further writings, but I don't think you'll need it.

(One little question, it was Kakashi's POV, right? Or not? Heheh, sorry for acting like a fool now... Oh, I love your story.)

That was so beautiful. I'm touched. I absolutely loved it and your style of writing is magnificant.

Gorgeous.

Very thoughtful and written well.

-SKies

Beautiful. :') sad but infinitely beautiful.

I really envy them. Kakashi and Iruka I mean. Why do fiction characters find love and comfort and safety in each other's arms?

...Oh yeah, to remind at least this authoress to have hope for herself.

Sorry, don't mind my odd ramblings. I'm having a depressive moment.

Ow...I think that one hit too deep...

That was so sad, I almost cried! Poor Iruka and Kakashi!

That was utterly beautiful.

It was so well thought out before written, one can clearly see that there was consideration and effort put into this piece.

And to tell you the truth, I found the concept this story related quite close to my heart, because one should truly 'live in today'. I guess that is the only time we are truly in control of our destiny, things we do now, not yesterday or tommrow, and I loved the way you conveyed it to Kakashi and Iruka.

Great piece of writing.

*Sniffles*