You and J. have very similar takes on this particular 'event' *cough*. Both are delightfully tasty and credible, though I hope if I do finally get the plot bunnies racing around in my brain finally down 'on paper' I won't be just repeating what's already been done!

Anyway, on to this story - I'm just starting to find how rare it is to find well written stories in FMA, and to find well written adult fic seems to be an even rarer find. This is quite delicious though it left me wanting more! You write well enough that I can easily get lost in the story and I find I am glad you've been inspired to do at least one more FMA story. ;)

Cute. :D I like this.

Why did u post this chapter twice...did you not think ppl would not notice...

Update a REAL chapter...

One that involves edward and milk and winry fun

XD

cute

like it.. go and make more!

thnks for doing it it entertained me.. a lot

Great chapter! I just love the EdWin fluff! And I like the idea of Winry giving him a haircut. The ending was awesome because that is the way Edward is; he tries to overcompensate and I'm glad that in this fic, Winry appreciates all that Edward is without any extras!

] haha, yay! an update!

I got excited, ibshafer, I won't lie... I looked in my yahoo inbox and nearly screamed with excitement.

I really liked this, and I can't wait for the next one!

~Cookie-kun

PS there were a few spelling errors in here, but it all comes from typing too fast, i think. Other than that, fantastic job! It made me laugh! (picturing Ed 'scruffy' always does xD)

yay for updating! loved it!

Aw...Cute, romantic, and...Winry KNOWS how to turn Ed into a cuddly little puppy, doesn't she?

You know I love everything you post, right? I read this one on LJ, and I'm glad you posted it here. Did you proof read it, though? There are no quotation marks, and tons of punctuation marks are missing. I'm just wondering if it was a technical error that needs to be fixed. Anyway, nice job!

o.o I went to click the "next chapter" button, but figured out that I couldn't. You should fix that sometime soon...

AnimeCookie93

PS O the torture... I'm sure Ed, heaven forbid, liked that torture... (I would have used italics, but I don't think you can in a review...)

AHA! I have begun! And I am completely enthralled thus far! XD

I have more words that I shall say later, when it is not absolutely imperative to my sanity that I go to sleep within the next fifteen minutes. _;;

Also, I got your messages, and I'm looking forward to being able to respond! I can't give any estimates as to when said responding shall occur, but it will be as soon as possible.

And I REALLY can't wait to keep reading this! I'm so excited. It seems that you had the concept of limited third person narrative nailed even in 2006! :D Not to mention I totally adore this idea and your execution of it. XD

And I really think that at least half the reason I love Ed himself as well as the EdWin pairing is because I imagine whatever lasting relationship I end up finding one day will be something very much like what Ed and Winry have. I think it just HAS to be for it to work. And I will love every second of it. XD The other half of the reason I love them is simply because I fiercely admire the people they are, but that's rambling for another day. XD

Anyway, I best be off before my brain succeeds in breaking through my skull. That would be messy.

Talk to you soon! :D

-Ashley/Eva

That introduction to Ed realizing he was blindfolded was hilarious, I think I scared a few of my cats away I couldn't stop giggling XD

I didn't think anymore chapters were going to come up in this fic, I'm plesantly surprised 3

*crosses fingers in hopes for the next one soon (XD)*

Poor Ed x3 He has the worst luck. I can't wait to read more!

:D