I loved this so much it was amazing that when Sirius was so worked up Remus could calm him down

I love this story x a million. I remember reading it like a million years ago and I just rediscovered it and it is pure gold. I love how you portray their relationship. :)

wow, this is great! i love your stuff which features sirius as a main character.

this was amazin i love reading R/S especially when there's more than fluff going on, dont get me wrong i love fluff! but this was really good to, and honestly i'v never seen anyone deal so well with all the issues Sirius is bound to have with all his problems.

So kudos.

Oh god that was so beautifully written. I love how Remus took control and knocked some sense into Sirius who is obviously so fucked up it's not funny. Poor Sirius. I'm glad he has friends like Remus and James!

Although this describes who Caleb is I'm a bit confused so if you are ever going to go back to this I would add a bit in about who he is.

I'll have a looksee on your bio page to see if you have any stories that this could tie in with, apart from that I think that it is well written and has got all of the ingredients for a good story!

Good Work!

I don't think I've ever reviewed a story on before, because most of the stories are rather... not reviewable? To put it nicely.m But this story - and all the other Sirius ones I've read by you - is so good. Everyone is so in character and I think its written so well and so realistically it could actually be a scene from one of the books (only its probably written better). Please, please continue this or write the background to it or something!

I agree with funkycharms23! Write more about Sirius' past because you do it so well - I've read Victim as well and I love your writing! This gives a really interesting portrayal of Sirius' character, and I definitely agree his upbringing would give anyone mental and emotional problems, but its interesting the way you've chosen to present these as violent outbursts, which I think matches his emotional and reckless character. I love the long-suffering but loyal Remus too. Its so Remus that he would unfailingly stick by someone even if they hurt him because he knows what its like and he just wants to be liked and needed. Absolutely brilliant story though...hint, hint!

excellent story!

i would like to know the whole background of this short stort though, who is caleb? will you write a long fiction detailing sirius' life and why he thought he was a whore, more about his parents,and other things, i'd be one avid reader if you did!

great work anyhow