Ah that last part made me tear up holy shit this was so good and so well written I loved it wow

Wow powerful at the end :)

really, really good

Such a hard hitting story, made me tear up a bit. Great job!

*wibbles* Oh drat it all, you've made me tear up! Oh, I suppose it is all my own fault for reading something marked with Angst. Though I suppose it is hopeful, too. I have to go read some fluff now.

Excellent, excellent, excellent job.

YAY! you used EUstace!

Beautiful!

Luna

beautiful! especially at the end! made me tear up.

What a beautiful story! I am at a total loss for words. Should I start at the beginning? But the end was written so well also! Your Aslan was very believable, and few writers can pull him off like that. And all the birthdays were so sad! And Peter having to be so cautious when talking to Susan. . . Listen to me! I'm going on in all the wrong order and I sound like a blithering idiot. . . Oh, dear. Just let me say that I truly enjoyed your story and can compare it to nothing. A wonderful job. ]

Wah! This beautiful fic made me cry - but in a good way. Hello, Favorite Stories list. I can't say enough about this fic: The characterizations were spot-on, the writing was excellent, and everything just ... fit. I've never read anything that quite captures the Pevensies' return(s) to our world as well as this story does. I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff. Very, very well done.

Beautiful. You brought me to tears at the end. :-) Thank you for writing this.

Just beautiful.

Oh my...that was wonderful. I loved the way you passed through all those years without making it seem rushed. That was a great story.

This was a very good photo book story. You took each sibling and time, put them in a frame and showed us a picture of a thousand words. Each little bit drew us in to see the joys and sorrows, the subtle nuances. I liked it alot.