Awesome! Plz make more soon!

Just picked up this, very interesting.

What happens next.

OM

This story is so addictive to read and its left at such a cliffhager for me, so please update soon! and keep up the good work!

Excellent. You've managed to make the fic action-packed without ever sacrificing the tenderness and internal problems that made me love Please Teacher! so much.

Look back at your earlier chapters, and you'll find at times that it's near impossible to tell who's saying what. Try to fix that.

Darn good story, please continue. I really want to see where you go with it.

COOL! MORE PLEASE, SIR! I REALLY LIKE THIS STORYY!

Thank god. i was afraid the story stalled completaly. I love the chapter though. Three seconds. cool. Keep it comming, dont leave us hanging.

yeah! Nice exciting chapter. I thought the action was very clear and easy to follow. Looking forward to the next one.

This is a good story, though your fight scenes kinda drag on...

I look forward to more.

FAST! Make another chapter!

I liek it the the Story ist picking up speed. Damn i'm getting agai this curiousity feeling "What is going to happen next?" shame on you for making me addicted to this story ;)

Keep up the good work and "What is going to happen next?"

m. comming to a climax, arnt we? :-D

the combat scene was a bit long, but thats a personal opinion. keep it up.

wow...never expected Sirus being a human. very nice twist... keep it coming

Great story and kep going. It's such a shame that so many of these Onegai fanfics die out and don't continue. Moshi is my hero.

WHOA! nice suppencefull chap. ending. tottaly sucks that melani got the disc back. maybe u can get Kei go help Moshi or you could make him beat Melani up for hurting Mizuho, that would be seriously funny.