Kurama is an actual fox?

Really want to read this but where are chapters 1 and 2?

The idea of having a YYH and X-Men crossover seems promising, but where the first two chapters deleted when you edited the story? In your author's note, you say: "Well here we go with the next chapter" and (from what I can see) chapter one's title is "Chapter 3 0,0".

I know this hasn't been updated in a while, but I enjoyed it. Hope your computer troubles circa 2013 resolved themselves! :)

Great chapter! :)

This was an amazing story!

I forgot to add in my review at chapter 40, that one of your chapters was riddled with '1/4' symbols.
You might to play around with formatting, though it seems as though you got better at making the bodies of text easier to read as the the story went along.

I have to tell you that I like the plot but your execution could use some work.
Somethings I noticed:
-There is a rushed quality to your story, as though you were trying to type it all down before you could forget it.
-The story is riddled with spelling mistakes(not too often but often enough), and words that spell-check thought you wanted but were not what you intended. ex. A few chapters back I saw the word 'worries' instead of 'warriors'
-Also in the first chapter was it not stated that Kurama was to be acting the persona described? it seems more that he had become it.
-I would also like to suggest that you take a run through the X-men wiki. You don't seem to have a grasp on who the characters are. Kirk is supposed to be Kurt, Kat supposed to be is Kitty, Rough supposed to be is Rogue.
-Try reading your story out loud to yourself it will help you pick up on things.

I have no intention of this being a flame of any sort. I rather like your story. _ Happy Writings!

don't worry i readed how love is born befor i readed this story and i love both of your stories very much

You should really check on your spelling, but a very good story so fare

Loved the story. I think I read it twice, this being the second time, without reviewing so I just thought I'd say good work and off to read HLIB and A Family.

Keep up the good work.

Envy.

what does 4ish mean?

i love it i didn't understand it at it was good

I really had fun reading this. I think the plot was perfect and it was so funny. My favorite part is when Yusuke runs out yelling "Damn Grandma and her evil snakes!" I couldn't stop laughing for 10 whole minutes. Good luck writing any thing else.

You have a very good idea here. It sounds like it could be a really good story. My only problem is the quality of the writing. The ideas are great and the story very interesting. And your spelling has gotten better from the first chapters to the other ones. It's just grammar and sentence structure. Hope this doesn't offend you because it wasn't meant to. Maybe you should consider having someone look over this and edit it.