so far i was liking it keep updating!

so cute

"The school is falling!" Layla responded, as loud as possible over the roaring winds. His eyes widened, as he took in the gravity of the situation. (A/N: Please God, forgive me for my sin against humanity, stupid unintentional pun.)

I know this story is being rewritten, but I have to tell you how hard I laughed when I reached this part in the story. All is forgiven, and thank you for give me a case of the chronic chuckles. That was great.

I didn't see that much wrong with the story. It was good, but as a writer myself, I understand that you are also critical of your work. I can't bring myself to finish one of my stories that I'd written when I was 13. After having gone through rigorous training for the AP English exam, I want to vomit when rereading my stories that I wrote when I was still in that stage of life.

I'd love to see what's going on with "Nature of Rainbows!" Keep up the good work!

-V

Loved your story can't wait for you to write more!

3s for Lash!

I hope he gets off okay

Update?

please?

Well, I wish it was the end. This story is horribly written and the author needs some serious help with their writing skills. Your oc, by the way, is a mary sue.

Im dying to know what happens next!will tenni be alright and will her and warren get together finally?I cant wait!

Can't wait until you update, loved how this turned out. & yea.

im soo happy you updated, i've been waiting so long for this story. Love it. Update again soon?

Queen C... I love Buffy! (I am right, right?) Anyways, great chapeter! Please update soon!

hey just wanted to drop aline saying i really enjoy your story and i'm looking forward to the next chapter nice work...again cant wait and great job.

please update! I want Tenni to be okay and her to have smexy kids with her Pyro God!

Raine

are you going to update? i miss this story.

Well I've only read the first chapter but Tenni doesn't seem very mary-sueish yet. This is a really good idea and I totally freaked out when I saw her b-day was february 9th cause that's also my b-day! Keep up the good work!