I like it. Kind of sad that it didn't have a kiss but still. And how did Malfoy know what kind of paper it was?

that was cute :0)

brilliant.

Oh dear. You made me read a Harry/Hermione! Ew. Just kidding. It was good. I just wish it had been Malfoy. I really like how at the beginning all of the boys sounded like suspects. Draco, Neville, Ron, Dean, Seamus... All except Harry, so that should have been a clue. Oh well. Toodles.

I loved this one too! You do such a terrific jobs w/your stories/one-shots! I'm not a big fan of anything not Draco/Hermione, but I've liked both your one-shots...and they weren't that exact pairing! I truly enjoyed reading this one, it made me smile so much! Great going!

wow, is it really that many who don't review? that's a lot lol. but i am, yay. i loved it, amazing really :) i usually don't like harry and hermione but that was really good. i like how you threw in little things so the admirer was kept secret, it could have been anyone

hey there. well, it was an interesting story, but i have to say it wasnt very good. sorry. but i think id rather honesty... and i hope you would too.

you dont seem to be able to articulate what you mean very well. you wrote:

"She sighed as the breeze rippled over her bare shoulders.

The black shawl was draped elegantly over her neck"

if her shawl is on her neck, then how can the breeze be on her shoulders? you should have said

"She sighed as the breeze rippled over her bare shoulders. Her black shawl had slipped down her arms to sit rest on her elbows and across her back. The dark colour made her pale skin seem luminous in the moonlight."

the way you say it is confusing and doesnt help the reader want to read more.

its a pretty good idea, i just dont think you have the skill to articulate it yet... you need some practice and a Beta.

luv'n'sunshine Alex

I will NEVER be a statistic! it was a good story i enjoyed it.