| Reviews for Revival of the Heart |
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Guest chapter 73 . 5/7/2017 Please update it |
waterflower20 chapter 73 . 6/8/2012 I really loved this story...And so I have a question for you. I understand your reasons for not continuing with this story but I was wondering if you would allow me to do 'll get full credit obviously and any ideas you may had will be welcome. If you are not comfortable with it,I totally understand and it's okay!Just thought to ask.I was thinking this for the last few years,ever since you posted your message but I was never sure... Either way you have a great story here! |
Sakurayamuni chapter 1 . 1/28/2012 amazing job |
Natascha-chan chapter 73 . 8/31/2011 Dear Angel's Nocturne, It's a shame that you haven't continued this story.. I've read your message with the reason why. But I think it's a shame that you decided to discontinue this story. In my opinion it's one of the best (if not the best) story I've read. Did you try to continue the story after you've read all of the chapters? Maybe then, if you read it, you can see your own storyline and plot again. It's not strange that, when you've written over 70 chapters, one can lose sight of the finish line. It's so sad because I've began to read your story a couple of years ago and I came across your authorsnote..just when the story itself was reaching it's end... This week I decided to do so again,because I couldn't forget about this story for more than 4 years, I've read all of the chapters.. And honestly I'll be so happy if you'll be continuing this story again. It's such a great story that it's a great loss to everyone who've read it and perhaps you too to just trow it in a trashcan and let the story be as it is now when it's nearly finished. I really hope that you'll find the will to continue this story again and release your readers out of their agony and give them the answers on what happens next in this story.. Sincerely, Natascha-chan. |
MCRmy Killjoy chapter 5 . 4/25/2011 Dear Angel's Nocturne (sorry, I probably spelt that wrong!) I've just started reading your fanfic "Revival of the Heart" and I would like to offer my virtual applaud and a virtual pat on the back. Well done! I'm only on chapter 6 (I've still got so much story to sift through!) so you'll probably be getting a lot more reviews from me from more chapters. Chapters 1 - 5 were interesting, although it seems to be going quite slow. I love the suspense of "who made da fog?" and, "who's messing wih' mah test paypurz?" and the such. I'll admit, I thought it was Atem, but it could've easily have been good Bakura, or Seto or Isis. And your Author's Notes make me laugh so hard! You're so funny! They're like, "Yeah, I got a million reviews, but I'm chill like that. Read." and I full on LOL. Not LOL like, "silent LOL," we're talking actually laughing out loud. Makes reading the story that little bit more enjoyable. I was a bit reluctant to review the story because you already have 700 reviews already, so I completely understand if you don't have the time or the energy to reply to this. You're a busy writer! BTw, 73 chapters and STILL not done? Skills, you have major skills. Best of luck with the story! |
iKiohri chapter 19 . 4/14/2011 I can't help but love Bakura's lines in this chapter: "Present and accounted for." And, of course, his sarcastic "Home sweet home." Hahah. Oh gosh, you are a great writer! |
iKiohri chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Omg. Veeryyy interesting start. And what a well-written chapter. I'm so sad that you discontinued this story. It has such a nice plot. Either way, I shall read it for as far as it goes. Hopefully, if ever... you'll come around and start writing it again. That'll definitely make a lot of your readers happyyy! |
princesskisara chapter 10 . 12/1/2010 Isis arrived, ugh... I just hope she didn't chatch by samira... |
princesskisara chapter 9 . 12/1/2010 My prediction: with kaiba, yugi, joey and tristan was under her control now. We only hope anzu, bakura. Isis and malik to face the evil princess... Ugh it would be though battle... |
princesskisara chapter 8 . 12/1/2010 Oh, no... She got yugi, how about anzu? Why she want her? I understand if she want the pharaoh...but anzu... |
princesskisara chapter 7 . 12/1/2010 Oh god, did yugi gone? Oh , the ending make my heart beat... |
princesskisara chapter 6 . 12/1/2010 Oh, it was kaiba then. Huft, i wonder what that princess had been planned... |
princesskisara chapter 5 . 12/1/2010 Hmm... Nice imagination for the afterlife. I enjoyed(smirk) well... I wonder who is the person who atem saw?... |
princesskisara chapter 4 . 11/30/2010 Oh, i understand how anzu feeling. How this chapter is so humanly. I like it. So far it was great story. I wonder why samira targeted anzu... Yay, i want to read more... |
princesskisara chapter 3 . 11/30/2010 So we had been entered into a new problem... Awesome. I wonder why samira watched them... Yugi weren't have millenium puzzle, weren't he? |