Reviews for Secret Boyfriend: 1
TheDarkLadyOfSlytherclaw chapter 10 . 1/2/2016
I honestly do not understand. Maybe because I'm not Catholic but how is this a secret life? Is it a secret from your family and friends? Because it isn't a secret from God. How is fanfiction taking priority over God? Is it because you spend most of your time writing? Or are you skipping church to write? You are an extremely talented when it comes to capturing characters and their emotions.
Do not neglect to do good and to share what you have, for such sacrifices are pleasing to God.-
Hebrews 13:16
If anything please reconsider deleting your account. Your stories be happiness to many people.
celrock chapter 10 . 12/29/2015
I just wanted to say, that I liked your story, and I'm sorry to hear you're planning to delete your account. :(
MARSADIES chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
DANG GREAT
AngelInTrianing chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
Oh, poor Chuckie stuck with Angelica who's bursting with anger. But I wonder what is going to happen?
chicagonebananas chapter 9 . 8/7/2006
awsome! great job!
anon chapter 5 . 8/7/2006
i would just like to point out that if the camra was film the sun or touching it would not have affected it. i use a video camara all the time. um... good story though!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 9 . 1/15/2006
Great! Now they will be at school!

I think you should show a little more of Angelica's reaction and feelings towards Chuckie (you had already shown his POV).

Keep the good writing.
Digital Damita chapter 9 . 1/15/2006
Ooh a message board, great :)
Digital Damita chapter 7 . 1/15/2006
Ha ha! Gotta lovethe last line..
Digital Damita chapter 6 . 1/15/2006
Wicked :)
Digital Damita chapter 5 . 1/15/2006
Brill hun totally brill!

God I am behind on reviewing :)

Yup my next fic, I will hopefully bounce it over to ya in the next couple of days :)
Account Not Used chapter 8 . 1/14/2006
Hey i really like this story so far. I was just wondering are chuckie and angelica gonna be getting together soon?

Anyway keep up the gud writing.
Ghostritter chapter 8 . 1/12/2006
In the classics, Angelica's words should never be taken as it is whether they are used to convey something negative or positive. Sometimes she lies to make herself look bad to cover up a good deed bashfully and sometimes she butters up people so she can get what she wants. Both examples in Rugrats: The Sky is Falling.

Indeed a very complex characteristic that may only be handled with proper execution. AGU ppl can't do this without being corney or jumping the shark and even in the post Dil Rugrats episodes.

Anyway, credit goes to you for using it like this in your fic. Its almost child like... As if Angelica's tricking Chuckie into giving her his cookie.

And don't worry about admitting feelings thing. The paradox about the c/a fancouple is that they're not meant to admit their feelings otherwise it defeats the purpose of C/A. Wierd huh?
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 8 . 1/12/2006
Magnificent chapters! The interaction between them is just terrific! Excellent exchanges, and nice description, as usual.

Angelica has a serious problem concerning her image; many times, it comes first than her own happiness, and you are reflecting it greatly. Obviously, she likes Chuckie as much as he does with her, but is hesitating because of who he is.

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 1/12/2006
Wow! Great chapters here! Angelica and everyone's else reactions were greatly displayed. Actually, it they hadn't been taped, maybe she and Chuckie could had ended the kissing in a kinder way.

Chuckie's ranting in the last chapter was very well described too.

Keep the good writing.
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