| Reviews for Now Look at What You've Done |
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   BlueMoon007 chapter 5 . 3/3/2019 Great story. Well written. |
| BlueMoon007 chapter 4 . 3/3/2019 Susan is being so hard on Edmund, geez, would she have been happy if her younger brother had been so brutally beaten? |
| BlueMoon007 chapter 1 . 3/3/2019 poor Edmund, he didn't break it by himself! |
| SweetWritingIsMyLife chapter 5 . 3/23/2017 Very good! |
| kkkk chapter 1 . 10/19/2016 until i read the next chapter, i thought edmund owned up. stupid 2 think so nice story BTW |
| pinksugarrush chapter 5 . 10/3/2014 Awww, very cute that Peter took the beating for Edmund. Ohhh, but the professor was so harsh for hitting Peter like that. Poor Peter and just for breaking his window, too. Good job. |
| paisleyluv96 chapter 5 . 7/27/2014 This was super. Thanks so much! Your writing is great! |
| Ashleigh2016 chapter 4 . 7/17/2012 Oh, wow! I love all the scripture in here. Please though, it almost has me crying every chapter. But that is good because that doesn't happen unless a story is written well enough to really draw me in. May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You, Ashleigh |
| Ashleigh2016 chapter 3 . 7/17/2012 Really well written and so sad, but I didn't cry. Thanks for the warning, that way I knew to be ready for it. May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You, Ashleigh |
| Ashleigh2016 chapter 2 . 7/17/2012 Very well written, enough to almost make me cry. I am really enjoying reading it. May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You, Ashleigh |
| Ashleigh2016 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 It is very rare for me to read a story with this rating, but so far I am enjoying it. Can they get to Narnia at the end of the story? May The Lion Be With You and His Blessings Upon You, Ashleigh |
| anon chapter 5 . 2/5/2011 this was really sweet! well done! |
| ZJFS chapter 5 . 7/26/2010 Why'd you switch this to M? Just curious...good job! I really liked this! Eminnis |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 5 . 12/1/2009 That was really cute! Some more editing would have been nice, as there were a lot of words completely missing or grouped together and the like, but otherwise, good topic (though that was pretty distracting)! Poor Pete. He really is a noble brother, and I LOVE the fact that Su was so kind! U Like that girl! The make-up scene from Ed was very cute, indeed! The origin of that line was very adorable! Gosh, you turned the Professor HORRIBLE! XC Awesome! BRILLIANT, though SCARY, job! Rock on! U *U* Ever-so sincerely signed, Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
| hetalian-system chapter 5 . 10/22/2009 a little rushed but it was a good story |
