Hmmm. Definitely has potential. Will near death be enough for Harry to consider anything other than his own opinion?
Also, I had expected Remus to speak with Harry after ending that meltdown...

Setting, plot and characters are all in tatters, this will be very difficult for Harry to change his outlook.
You've certainly established the conflict on multiple fronts, it will be interesting to see how you 'fix your mess' :)

Nice ending. I am looking forward to your next story.

- Mark A Heffron -

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

Draco couldnt have been there BC Harry said he hit him with all 3 unforgivable curses when draco killed Ginny during the battle of Hogwarts years before this

Guess I was wrong. Good story though.

Ugh, Padma annoys the absolute fuck out of me. But I know there is a high chance she's going to get with Blaise – and I like him – so I guess I have to get use to her.

Lol in all honesty, I liked Harry and Susan fighting better, it was much more entertaining. Their relationship is kind of boring without all the arguments.

Lovely story, especially the subplot of Padma

What a different story. Very sad in a lot of places but even a bit of humour mixed in. I know we are supposed to think that the hunched man was Blaise but I don't see how he could have survived but I wouldn't be surprised if it had been Death leaving a small gift for her.

This story have a major problem - start completely failed to interest me in reading more, I started skimming after few paragraphs. Checking random chapters also failed to interest me in any way. It needs some hook - at start of story or at least in description.

Pretty good story

Have been on a roll with your stories this evening. This is a particularly good one!

Thanks.

This was a very well written story.

I'll add it to my favs.

:)

Wow, great ending! Totally awesome!

Delightful. I really liked this story. Unique, sweet, and a little adventerous.

-demonicnargles