LOVE IT SO FREAKING MUCH! 3

Ahahaa! I laughed out loud with the last sentence-totally random!
Not that Mc-bastard-Laggan didn't deserve it...
xx

I love how Ron tells Hermione he loves her, just too sweet! :)

OHMYROWLING! This is too cute! I loveeeeeeeeee it!

You know, I can see the Great Hogwarts Purge of 1998 coming right after this if I ever cross HP into my C&C fanfic series (Jane Shepard Hermione's Mother, instigator of the Purge), 90% plus of Slytherin will be shot, Cormac McLaggen will be too, plus some others. It's good to have a mother who is co-owners with her sister of one of the largest military pwoers of the world.

I just finished reading this story.

It is very cute and very well written :D

! I LOVE THE STORY!EXCELLENT PORTRAYAL OF THE CHARACTERS!I LOVED EVERY PART EXCEPT THE PART ABOUT MCLAGGEN BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT EVEN THAT WAS WONDERFUL! GREAT JOB!

lovely!

and i've been stifling my laugh like crazy...

i'm readin in the middle of the night...

i don't want to wake up anyone else, do i...?

The way you wrote him, I'm surprised that Ron can walk, let alone breath by himself. He's clueless, that's a given, but not downright dumb.

This has been pretty good so far, but you honestly lost me when you said Parvati and Lavender were in ADVANCED Herbology. That's just ridiculous.

your portrayal of Bill and Charlie is starting to bug me. Fred and George were the worst pranksters at the school since the Marauders, and Bill and Charlie aren't twins so they don't do the wierd finnish each others sentances thing. It seems like a much more Fred and George thing that you have them doing, I mean Bill was head boy, and Charlie was Quiddich captain, this really doesn't make any sense. I think it would be better if Fred and George were the one's helping the guys get Ron and Hermione together like this. If you insist on using Bill and Charlie make the less like Fred and George, it is very OOC and it is seriously bugging me. (I know that this story is complete, but for future referance, please don't make Bill and Charlie exactly like the twins, it's really creepy, not to mention that if they really were worse than the twins then not only would they have been the ones to open the joke shop but Mr and Mrs Weasly would have been to afraid to have more children.) I will be reading Bill as Fred and Charlie as George form now on, because them acting like that doesn't creep me out. love the story so far!

Oh, that one was excellent. You'd better keep writing.. or else. :k

I'll set my ghoul friends on you. 0:-)

HAHAHAHA! "The room IS clean!"

hehehe. "You make good porridge!"

omfg. roflmao! "No more dinner for the both of you!"