Sequel you say? (swirls wine & glances at calendar)
Not bloody likely.

So, so good!

I can’t believe you stopped there. Cruel. You are cruel. It’s almost midnight and I have work tomorrow but I had to keep reading. And then you stopped.

I really liked your story, but it isn’t completed!

Hey, I know you wrote this a really long time ago and probably don't get these messages anymore, but just in case. I really liked it and feel like you wrote Sarah's character really well, which frankly seems rather rare. I know I couldn't do it. I first found this story several years ago and keep coming back to it, and the hook ending is killing me.

I was looking for the mentioned sequels in the comments and couldn't find them. Did that not go to plan and they were never written, or am I just not looking in the right place? If you feel like humoring me, you can reach me at or I'm sure I'll be reading this story again someday so if you don't want to risk it but still want to say something you could update the epilogue author's notes on Labyrinth Immortal Love.

k thanks love you byeeeee

I require this mysterious sequel this story was so amazing!

Very pleased with your story, well written and accurate to my knowledge of related topics (folklore, etc.). I enjoy what you have added and how you have interpreted the feelings involved.

This Fae approves of your work.

Awesome. Loved it. I really want to know the significance of the silver necklace. And like everyone else on want to know where the promised sequel is. Haha.

Please return with a sequel! So good!

Love this story, especially this chapter. What a great rewrite of the original story's ending!

I feel cheated. There is definitely no sequel in your list of stories. I've read all your labyrinth except the miserious stench at this point and I did quite enjoy them all. I noticed you wrote the last in 2018 so I'm holding out hope it'll be written eventually.

I loved your little goblins. Shove was adorable in his mischief. I liked the bringing pictures back to Jareth so he could have a laugh out of them and how when she found another she'd already decided and made a copy for just that reason. I loved the first oubliette scene where she asks not to be forgotten and he says he can't forget her. The wish. I love the wording of it. It binds but there's all sorts of friends it doesn't ask for more than anyone is willing to give at that point because a friend is variable. I liked the Minnie's character and how it showed another side of the wished away and what comes of it.
That cliffhanger though. So mean.
Anyway. Thanks for the stories, they've all been awesome.
~AtF

Amazingly written. I never review, just didn't feel the want nor need to do so. For this tale... I just HAD to sign-up and review. The story managed so many things in just a little over a dozen chapters. It fair left me breathless. Jareth was everything chaotically ambiguous we know and love, while Sarah grows and adapts (as many mortals do) to a situation beyond her ken initially. Stunningly brilliant intensity, humor, and tie-ins to the movie and their original confrontation. I truly hope to eventually see a sequal to this. On a side note, I am truly sorry to hear of overly rabid fans of Labyrinth and your stories doing anything distasteful, such as adopting out YOUR story without permission... simply in order to fulfill their own need for instant gratification.

If I have my facts right, the actress that played Sarah was 14 or 15.
Teenagers are hard to characterize, they are at the age where as people they are changing constantly.
It is much easier to watch the movie, write a slightly different ending, than to write Sarah as an adult.

You're doing fine so far.

Magic. Pure, unadulterated magic. That is what I experienced throughout the tale. The sense of mystic oneness with another dimension, where the extraordinary co- exists with the ordinary. Where miracles happen as willed, and owls carry intent. You unerringly drew me there, and unware I was shaped by that fantastic reality, carried seamlessly into other lives, surroundings, and love. I re-emerged into the mundane blinking, unsure, only reluctantly surrendering to my own life. That is the power of a great Author, and you are one.

Thank you for the experience. Dec 23, 2018

Damn. Just, damn. That was both lovely, thrilling and also heartbreaking. And that last line? What a deftly wielded hammer.