Thats messed up, in the best way possible please continue. there isin't enough storys about Mini-Cons like this.

Damn...

This is a very good piece. I like the way you portray the helplessness of the minicons and the callousness of their enslavers. Megatron is, near as I can tell since I'm not that familiar with the Armada/Energon version of the character, very much in character and I pretty much ached for poor Leader-1. Poor little guy...

brilliant i liked it the comparision that optimus is such a major suckup destony and honour speech is lame i watched BWTF and he is pathetic in that too

he's just pathetic (prime) and the idea of choice over the minicon is excellent

(sorry about before i will improve with your help i can be as good as you forgive my bad attitude before)

Oh yeah man i hate to be leader one right now oww it sounds painful

do another one plz you are going..gone into my faves list

This kicked ass! Megatron is one evil and ruthless bastard.

Poor Leader 1. I would never want to be Megatron's minicon.

Disturbing as all hell. I liked it.

-In a slightly disturbing way, it reminded him of his ancient nemesis, Optimus Prime. The chief commander, the number one leader.

Perfect.-

Love Megs identifying Prime with his personal little pet. Also love the idea of Megs choosing a Minicon, not only on strength, but on how well they would compliment his paint job. Oddly IC, considering that he's also being portarayed as one evil, evil bastard. Many cookies to you.

M, lovely description of the powerlinking process. And both examples of Minicon/Bulk interaction are interesting, especially the use of bilingualism as a weapon of sorts.

Nitpicks, nitpicks... There's a bit missing here: "...a berth that appeared" Elsewhere, there's an 's' trying to pass itself off as a 'g' in 'hangings'. Otherwise, is all good. And Megatron. And good Megatron is really scary Megatron. Which he is. And this is joy.

Ah, finally something new. I really like your D-cons.

You give me idea for drawing Meg and leader-1.

And that really a good fic you got there keep the good work ;)

Very interesting. I can't quite pin another word onto it...