great story! D

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haha

thats heaps good

i like it.

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you should get a beta since english isnt your first language, will make it an easier read and people will be more willing to continue reading and review.

well im off

niight xoxo

Hello Eli0t _

It's was very cute, i really love your one-shot ... Congratulation for your good work, it's not easy to write in a another langage (I know something lol) _

I will like, if it's possible, to translate this OS in French, for the people who's not the chance to speak english _

Thanks, and good continuation for your next story.

Bye

SweetLullaby _

aww, that was really cute :) Well done!

i liked it alot great job

I really liked the story. Your english was great. Also, its really cool that you speak German! I'm taking German this year, but so far we've really only covered Geography. I know Ich heisse Courtney(or Hedwig, since that's my German name) and Wie heisst du? That's basically it.

. cute

Great story!

What do you mean English ain't ya first laanguage?Your better at it thn i am and I'm Allout-Amrican!

I know you are a great writer even if English isn't your first language. I love your stories.

u d great storys ive read them all so keep righting i cant right 4 another day or so but look me up and give me a r/r please

Aww, I wouldnt flame you! This was far too cute for flames, not to mention too well writen :D I loved it, great job!

Aww... the ending was really cute _

This was interesting...and I liked the idea for it. I just think that maybe a little action and a little description would really help develop the story as it prgresses. But the good thing is you can get the whole plot of the story from the dialogue.

Nfinity

Perfect ending.