| Reviews for Pure Flower |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 Since FF is blocked would you consider another domain? |
shante kinney chapter 1 . 7/31/2019 Give me one more chapter... |
Guest chapter 20 . 10/14/2018 Oh man I absolutely love this story, it got confusing at some point but it was good drama, love that rin (our rin lol) lived at the end :) |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/14/2018 Oh I’m so confused did rin just died and the vengeful wing clan rin came back? |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/13/2018 Rin is so good with children |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/5/2018 Ummm. I like your story a lot but you can’t just tell one story in the beginning and then completely switch it in later chapters. For example, in the beginning, you said that Rin didn’t know why her mother disappeared and that her mother’s execution had been fake and Lord Soma had actually allowed her mother to live. But now you’re saying that Rin’s Mother’s death had been real and that Rin witnessed her death? You attempt to make Rin out as this revenge seeking character who has a dark history when she was originally this innocent, sweet girl. That’s way too abrupt of a change for readers to follow. Instead of attempting to craft complex characters in the middle of the story, you should continue with the characters you created in the beginning or just make another story. Simple is sometimes better. |
SpiritedRanger chapter 1 . 5/27/2018 Waah me hooked looking forward to reading the rest of this story. |
p.roman8391 chapter 20 . 3/27/2018 Ahhh what a way to wrap up a intense story! I hope you return soon with the next chapter. Such an amazing story. Had me on edge the entire time reading |
Jin chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Can't wait until you finish the last chapter this is one of my favorite stories. |
Ronniefanficfan 18 chapter 18 . 3/13/2018 WELCOME BACK! /Hugs you tightly- When I saw this update I looked at it for a minute like omg omg omg this can’t be real but it was YAYAYAYAY! I loved this chapter oh lord I’m sooooooo happy that you haven’t given up on this your writing is the of dreams I LOVE THIS STORY!. Happily awaiting the next chapter BIGFAN |
Tay chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 Don't forget to update your other story (Wants and Needs) can't wait to see how that's going to turn out. |
Guest chapter 20 . 3/11/2018 ;-;-;;;;;;;;-; euhhhehheheww its ending soon...I'm not prepared ~ |
Taraah36 chapter 20 . 3/11/2018 awww she lives! yay! |
Tay chapter 17 . 3/11/2018 Wow... So happy you updated this is one of my favorite stories. I so love you right now. |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/11/2018 Wow! I can’t believe that you actually updated this story. I’m happy that you decide to finish it but at the same time, I’m sad to heard it about to end. |