I love you Obi-Wan stories! The relationship between him and Master Jinn is masterful.
Thank you for writing these!
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I liked this.
Wish Obi Wan hadn't been quite as "nevrotic" as he was near the end, although I suppose it is realistic in one way, he's had 15 years of Jedi training, hence I'd have liked his fear and pain to be expressed a bit more subtle. Not so realistic according to what's normal for regular boys.

But all in all, it was a very good write. I read all the chapters, and I usually quit after the first couple if the writing isn't up to par and it's not interesting enough.

Would have also loved more of him in the monestary, that was very interesting. Seeing him interact and live in a slightly different environment was some of what kept me hooked. Also, some of the travelling could have been better documented. I understand why you cut things short, after all this is a fanfic and not a book, and the only reason for me wanting more is because this was good stuff. People always want more of good stuff :)

But great job, and an interesting fic!

Every bit as good as Problem Child-better even, perhaps. It was a bit disconcerting, being kept in the dark for so long, but in the end worth it. And wow, even an explanation as to how he got the name Ben. *laugh*
Great job. Looking forward to catching up with Haunted. :]

Oh my goodness, I almost quit reading after the beginning of the last chapter just because of what the Council was doing to Obi-Wan. I did not even realized that it could have been something else instead, but once it was said, it made much more sense. Nevertheless, that does not make me any less pissed off at the council for what they did. I'm with Qui-Gon and the strangling bit. Lol.

Another fantastic story I am glad things worked out for the master apprentice team! Thanks for writing and posting! : )

I loved your story! Couldn't put it down! Keep up the awesome writing!

AH, please post this! i really want to read it!
Please?

so when will you get this story posted? most of us r going crazy waiting for it.

So where is Haunted, HMMMMMMMM? I want to know what happens next!

Thank you for writing this sequel, It was definitely my favorite of the two. I loved being able to travel to the different places with Obi-Wan and meet new people and friends. The best part was when he found a place no one could find him, a place where he could find peace and happiness. I look forward to the next story in your series but I find that it has not been posted. Are you going to post it? Write it? I really loved this story and hope that you do write the next, I also hope that we get to see Merrick again for that promised spar between lightsaber and staff.

Ruin

wel.. maybe you are tired of thhis, but... I truly like the two first part and i was wondering, if.. well you may continue this... I do hope that you are well :3

This series is really good. Just one question:

It's been four years; where's the next book?

I just wanted to let you know, I just finished reading your two stories in your Star Wars 'trilogy'. I think you have a very plausible AU and I love how you depict Obi-wan and Qui-gon.

Any chance the third story will ever make it up? I know that years ago you lost your copy to a harddrive fail. Did you ever make it back to writing it, or does it lie dormant in the nether regions never to be heard from again?

Either way, just wanted to thank you for the good read. :)

i loved all of this! In some ways i liked it better than the first though i think thats more because there was more going on, the close calls by Jinn in finding Obi-Wan and the sheer adventure of it. It literally drew me in an dowuldnt let me go until i'd read it all (which is kind of bad since I was supposed to do other things today not just read JA fanfic lol!).

I can't tell you a part i didnt like, or which didnt create some sort of reaction, and the wya it was written..again you wove it together, the mystery, the chase, Obi-Wan's (does appear to have benefitted from his time away wouldnt you say?) running, the emotions, interactions and well just everything! Jinn's reactions to it all and again the switching back and forth just made this one all the more enjoyable...helped further by the strong character use in even the OCs.

A couple of things: DID the council feel the darkness? Jinn seemed to in the training room but that could have been due to his connection and having felt Toman(?) before through Obi's mind. It doesnt really make much sense if they could sense him or well how did he continually get in or follow Jinn around?

Merrick is a fav OC I think. Also liked how you gave him the name Ben...almost like a note to the later films cause it never made sense to me that he was called that. Also the staff too. How was Toman able to take control of Obi like that so easily...is it mostly due to the former bond they had and with these 'bombs' and who planted the 'bomb' in Jinn's mind (Toman...when and how?). None of it s really faulty its just little confusions/questions ive had you know. Another was that QuiGon didnt know the bodyguard was Obi-Wan...i mean yeah sure the hairs different even bleached another colour from what you suggested, he's not wearing the same clothes and 'repressing?' his Force signature as well trying to stand and talk like a local but what about his voice? Though that could be answered if your're able to tell me more on the timeline of things...as a boys voice changes drastically from their early to mid and then late teens.

I seem to recall a mention of 2 years? having passed since Obi-Wan's repudiate from Toman, or at least it was greater than a few months right? And he was 12 in the 1st fic i believe. He spent quite a bit of time trying to get to the monastery but even if we say he was 14 at the start of this fic I dont think it took him a year to go between the Temple and the moanstery. So he'd have to be mid 14 at least and it took maybe a few months? Because someone distinctly says that he's 15 to which he agrees internally when he gets there. He's there for several months i think but there's not much time in between him leaving and getting that bodgyguard job right. Because it must have been at least 1 or 2 weeks before the attack and then he was with Regina for over 3 months correct? so he's away for what a year? more? The reaosn i want to clarify is because from Jinn's side you mention months and its hard to say when his pov occurs...sometime sit seems dead in time with Obi's and others not so. There's also a line after he's been found that seems to suggest Obi-Wan's not been missing all that long...or maybe thats just me getting mixed up :p Anyway one of my points is that even if his voice didnt go through any significant changes you'd need a lot of time before you forget what someone sounds like though you maybe find you cant recall it without hearing it first. Why did the Force not nudge him to say that he's found him? I suppose the bruising on his face meant a non clear picture there but even after the Regina girls safe the Force provides no clues as to the boys identity to Jinn...mind you that bit IS really funny to read...Jinn goes off to search for his padawan when he's just left him there in the Temple! And it did seem at times as though they'd meet before hand considering Jinn kept passing places and people Obi-Wan had been...somehow all the close calls made that unknowing meetup at the hideout all the more intense and amusing.

Well thats enough rambles from me i'm sure...did i mention how much i enjoyed it? ...Good.

Kinda hoping you do come back to this idea youve had, I find i dont particularly want ot give up this storyline youve got going just yet and I'd REALLY like the see the match between Merrick and Ben occur...maybe with Jinn realising he'd been had. Thanks again!

Amazing story or should I say sequel. You totally hooked me with the first story and now have me bouncing on my chair while reading this sequel.

This trailer for the third story in this trilogy though, has me overexcited, anxious, nerves standing on edge and overall blowing my mind. I totally like you written trailers, I can see it in my head as I read it like a real trailer. Of course making these into an acutal trailer is difficult cause you don't have any of the scenes of what you wrote, tohugh th vocals you could try and do yourself, but then it wouldn't be Obi-Wan like and stuff.

Anyway I'm totally digging this trilogy, and sincerely hope you'll find the time and will to write the third part of the trilogy.

I checked on your site and saw all those chapter titles with the third story, it gave me a little hope that you haven't completely given up on the third story. Please please please, let me know what's happening with you, let me know if my hope is justified or if it will be crushed, brutally, horribly, mind numbing me, destroying my whole world...

Sorry for that, I tend to get overemotional about stuff that grips me, hooks me, refuses to let me go etc.

Loving this story, loved the monastry thing and Obi-Wan's new staff, but don't let ihm forget his light saber though, maybe he could wield them at the same time, but that would probably either be impossible or take a lot of training and skill seeing as the staff demands two ahnds and a light saber COULD be used single handed. Anyway, keep me informed please!