Reviews for Fly in a Web
cadmium yellow tuesday chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Intense,a side we don't see very often.
Good.
Executed wonderfully.
Shadougelover14 chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
Awesome story! The details and interactions, though short, between the two are spot on. I rather like these dark Zim captures Dib stories.

And I don't know if this was intentional or not, but in the episode, Bloaty's Pizza Hog, when Dib snuck into Zim's base, he told Gaz that if something went wrong to call that agency he talks with and give them the code "The Mothman is caught in the spider's web".

The insect might be different, but I thought it was the neatest coincidence. Was that intentional?
Whirl Feather chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Wow. Just all I can say is wow. I love how you upped the a antsy by leaving things out and at certain points :) quite like a horror movie, in a way...loved it!
AmpHead chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
WOW.
RaineP chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Just by reading the first sentence, I knew I would love this story. :)

For a one-shot, this is probably one of the best Invader Zim fanfics I've read in a while.

I love how you describe things, like Dib feeling like he was a fly in a web..Having those visuals while reading is excellent, and just adds so much more to it. Zim and Dib are in character the whole time, and like I said before, your describing is just so..GAH! Amazing! :D I'll defiantly check out your other works, because this is excellent! Nice work! :)

(PS - I found this on TV tropes, for Invader Zim Fanfiction! It was listed as one of the better ones there! :D)
epoose chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
ngl i kind of laughed

gosh zim you creepy fuck
Golden Snowflake chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Holy monkies.

That was fantastic.
MonPetitLoupDeMort chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Delicious. Beautifully executed. Just enough there to vividly sear the emotion. Pretty much everything I was craving in a fic right now.
Bells chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This was sick, twisted, disturbing, demented, warped, and other such synonyms. I literally shuddered as I read it.

I've never been so turned on by this pairing.
Snoessie chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
I'm not sure why this is posted at the ZADR community, but apart from that... :D :D :D This is good stuff I like evil/sadistic Zim too I know it's a one shot, but man, I really would like to know what other terrible stuff Zim will do to poor defenseless Dib (A) Ah well, I just have to guess I guess :P
beaniejeanie chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
God, I LOVE your stories! They're all so good!

Beans
mattneedschocolate chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
o_0...update soon please...passes out...x_x
ArtemisFowlTheThird chapter 1 . 5/20/2007
Kinda scary...but oh so sexy! I like it!
Autumn chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I LOVE RANDOM READING AW YEAH!
evildeathbee chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I'll have to remember this one.
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