Fantastic!

Aww... T.T We get to see Nine's sensitive side.

lovely!

this is AWESOMELY sad and wonderful

but...

i want a dad now *cries*

One word. Amazing. It made me smile and cry but moslty smile.

Awesome story!

That was so upsetting - your author's note had me welling up before i had even read the story. I watched that episode the other day and it makes me cry every time without fail - this fits perfectly. I think its also so effective because its personal. Lovely work.

I know i'm reviewing this almost 7 months after it was published which is kind of strange but i've just read one of your more recent stories so thought i'd check out more of your work - which are all great by the way. Keep up the good work.

Brilliant - I think it managed to show her emotions so, so well. It was short, but that doesn't matter at all. It works perfectly.

What a beautiful and sad story. It did nearly make me cry, so I'd say you did your job pretty well. It's short but it says everything it needs to say and I don't think there's anythin gyou coul ddo to make it better.

Lovely story. That story brought more than one tear to my eye, and I'm glad I'm not alone in writing a story to deal with what she had to be feeling.

Aw beautiful sad ficet that managed to make me smile. Great writing, well done. Keep it up :- )

hmm there doesn't seem to be anyother reviews as yet, so this may be the first one..

This story seems to be able to capture one of the strongest moments in our life and I'm sure your farther is proud or at least would be. Especially taking a risk and putting at least some emotions on the line in a non cliche manner.

indeed this story is a small glimps of your heart/soul, as beautiful as it is.

you also can be certian if you ever need a shoulder to cry on you will always have one, no matter how long the crying lasts.