Reviews for Drowning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can't guess how many years it's been since I read this for the first time (probably closer to ten than five, though) and I guess I never left a review? You probably don't even read these anymore, but I'm still here to leave them. Basically, this one is still super cute. It's a very astute observation that, well, Ash does try to drown a lot. And of course Misty would take issue with that! I love playing with the little things like that in the anime and, well, the shipping just sweetens the deal. It's super simple, but well executed. Good job! |
![]() ![]() This was soo cute! I honestly burst into giggles when misty told him not to put on his hat, like how he likes to see misty with her hair downXD |
![]() ![]() Amazing ! |
![]() ![]() Oh, no hair tie for Ash, and no hat for M9isty, eh? Fair enough... Haha! Cute fic! Love it! AAML forever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute xD. In that one episode he really did love her hair down xD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you posted this about six years ago, but it was really good. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic! I love the concept of it and you did a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, this was so cute! And very nicely written! Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Cant tell you how often I've reread it. Still utterly brilliant and sweet. "Ash felt the heat in his face that accompanied a blush; hoped she didn’t notice it. A little bit of him hoped she did." -Perfectly epitomizes that feeling of having a crush and wanting them to know but also not. Super charming, and mad cute with their hair. And the sandslash bit. Which, props for it being a sandslash, as the word itself has a very musical quality and worked well with the feel of teh story. Wonderful work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about that wrong upgrade but i kind of like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT!' and thats all i have to say |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! It was romantic and funny at the same time, a masterpiece. I hope you continue to make more stories like this soon! sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml p.s- please see my stories -EVAN AAML |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so cute. I love how Ash took her hair tie. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Not to mushy, not too rigid. Very sweet without giving me a cavity. Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow. One of the best pieces I've read in my ventures here. The first line was a perfect choice. And the ending? Even better. You are amazing. I think a lot of people feel that way about Misty- she looks so pretty with her hair down, and yet, she rarely does that. Who would have thought that she liked Ash's hair without a hat on it? (Though, there are a couple coworkers of mine I would LOVE to see without their hats on. They're so paranoid, they'll even shove you if you touch their hat. Good thing Ash's not that way!) Good work! I really, really enjoyed this. It's 11:30, now, though, and I've gotta get up at 4:30 (might get up earlier, though). I hate getting up so early! Stupid job! (Haha) Keep it up! -KK |