cool i love the series

Nice work! You did Yatchan really well! Your portrayal of Rushuna was pretty good too!

Keep Smiling!

Very nice. To bad you didn't do one on mikan.

Well, everything's spelled correctly. _ I always like to start with something positive. This honestly isn't much of a story. It's more like a summary of the first episode. Wish I could make some suggestions on what to improve... other than just scrapping it and starting over. Does not show any creativity...

A little short, but hey, a grenadier fic is a grenadier fic. At least, you wrote one! Anyways, I thought that this fic was quite good, so good job! Grenadier isn't very popular is it? :P

Later,

Wolfy

What catergory was this story originally published under?

A month ago, it did not exist!

wotage! a grenadier fic... even tho not good by my standards, it is at least the start of Grenadier fandom here!

) go on, Grenadier needs promotion! XD