Reviews for Confessions of a WhitelighterWitch
Dominus Trinus chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Can't believe I forgot to review this after reading it twice! This is really one of the best Piper and Paige centered fics. So brilliant job!
storiesundertheradar chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
This was pretty awesome. You nailed both Piper and Paige perfectly. I'm a sucker for stories like these with PIper and Paige. Thank you :)
charmed-darkangel chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Very cute
emily cabrera chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Sweet story! I love sisterly bonding type stories, especially with Paige since she is my favorite caracter. Maybe you could do more bonding stories, although i haven't visited ur profile, you might have already done could do the 'Meeting between Prue and Paige',or 'All 4 sisters together once more', you wright very good, so anything you write would be amazing.
ImagingThings chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Sweet... sad... so... are you going to write the story of Paige and Kyle getting back together?
Maetro chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
Wow, a much needed sister chat between Piper and Paige. I loved it. It was touching and warm.
Up1965 chapter 1 . 12/27/2006
It was very good I actually got teary-eyed at some parts. You are right there should be more Paige/Piper moments but since there is not it is up to us to make sure to make those moments come to life the ones they didn't do on screen. Anyway it was a very good story.
19Lenny19 chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Wow! That was great! I love Paige/Piper sisterly bonding stories and yours is definately one of the best i've read.

Well done, you're a fantastic writer :)
RIP GG and VM chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
This was a really great story! I felt sorry for Paige :( I didn't realize it was Kyle's snowglobe.
quickstar989 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
I still consider this one of the best one-shots one this site. From masterful use of dialogue to spine-tingling details, everything came together perfectly.

Let's start out with me praising you on keeping Piper completely in her character while showing a side of her we rarely got to see in the later seasons. A loving and caring big sister to Paige. Everything Piper said to Paige were things Piper would say, even though we've never heard her say them. Get it? lol.

[“Goodnight, Missy Paige,” She whispered into the darkness. “Don’t let the bed bugs bite.” ]

*That's* the Piper I love. Playful, warm and loving. Her intense concern for Paige was SO sweet and realistic. You just really write these two together wonderfully. Before I go any further, I have to say this...

[She knew she had locked the back door because after she had done it Paige and herself had locked Phoebe in the alcove, insisting that she shut up about her future child.]

Hee-larious! That's one way to shut her up. And Phoebe dancing in her room, making a complete fool of herself was another big LOL in this fic. Phoebe bashing, gotta love it.

I love that you had Paige drunk and not only depressed. This instantly alerts Piper to know something's wrong with her, AND it stays true to Paige's character. A lot of people forget that she had a drinking problem when she was younger. Can't blame them since the writers forgot completely about Paige's backstory and never really mentioned after season 4.

You included Kyle mentions and the snow globe. Couldn't ask for more there. She misses him and is protective of their snowglobe, aw!

[“So…” Piper began, using her thumbs to gently wipe the tears from her sister’s face.]

Should not have made me sniffle, but it did. That's just sad picturing it.

Can't tell you how awesome it is that they talked on top of the building where Paige was first attacked. It kinda like all ties up together. Lemme tell you, Piper snapping at Paige after she refused to tell her what was wrong was just SO well written. She really did need to tell Paige those things, and they were a long time coming.

The "I love yous" was the icing ontop of the cake.

[ “…you’ve never told me that you love me.” ]

Followed by:

["Missy Paige? I love you."]

And:

[“Love you too, Piper.” She whispered.]

Show why I love their relationship so much. And you, Miss Laur, are damn brilliant.

[“You will get him back.” She said, playfully pursing her lips and giving Paige’s butt a quick slap. “Now let’s get home!”

Paige gave Piper’s arm a light-hearted smack in mock offence. “Thanks, Piper.” She said, beaming, and the two disappeared in a cloud of swirling orbs. “For everything.”]

PERFECT ending to just a fantastic story. One liners between Piper and Paige gave it a comedic touch, mixed with emotional dialogue and excellent details that you could only write. I'm in awe of you, even after reading it 10,0 times. Bravo!

Now... I want a sequel! *grin*
Pricilla Grey chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Oh- so good! I love love love love LOVE sister bonding, especially between Piper and Paige- I love it almost as much as I love fictions about Paige and Kyle! I can't wait for the sequel :)
silver-star-0 chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Yeah, there is a serious shortage of Piper and Paige sister moments. There's Piper and Phoebe all the time, though...
Princess Pinky chapter 1 . 11/24/2005
I KNOW! I completely fail at life. But I AM reviewing now, so I hope all is well...

OMGoddess! I love that you share my Piper & Paige passion! This season as been the worst, hasn't it? They've completely cut Paige from any sisterly bonding! It's all about Phoebe & Piper. Damn the writers! I want a Piper and Paige moment!

I loved, loved, loved, loved this story! The way you wrote it was masterful. I felt like I was actually standing right there, watching the whole scene play out. I can almost smell the Manor. (I know, I'm a tad strange.) I loved the scene with Phoebe and the dancing. It reminded me of young Phoebe in season one. And I loved when Piper was thinking about locking Phoebe in the laundry closet, because it reminded me of when Piper and, I think Phoebe, locked Prue in there. lol The helipad and the snowglobe were great too, as you brought a little of the past season into this fanfic. (I mentioned those together, as with both of them I didn't even realize that they were from the past until you explained it.) This was so amazing. And I'm a hardcore Paige/Glenn fan, so saying that is a big step for me. If you a sequel that centered around the Piper & Paige sisterly bond, then I would totally be up for it (even if it is Paige/Kyle).
Laurie Lu chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
Hey! I'm so glad you decided to write this. I love Paige/Piper sisterly moments . . . there aren't enough of them on the show.

Your writing creates such great visual imagery . . . I could envision everything you wrote. The details you include bring the story to life - something I've never been good at. I wanted to cry (several times) and then you had me laughing out loud. Can't wait until you update!

Lulu:)
Bex rebanana chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
Amazing.

I wasn't going to review b/c I don't have much time, but damn it! You MADE me review with this wonderfulness. I agree, Paige and Piper NEED more time together, after all they're my 2 FAVORITES. lol, loved the embarrassing scene w/ Pheebs. Don't think I hate Pheebs as much as you do but i absolutely DESPISE what she became after Cole died. She lost all depth, and became way too silly and annoying and whiney! So Paige and Pip NEED to be nicer to eachother. There hasnt been ANY interaction lately. I'm so glad you wrote this, i only wish you could write for the show and make an actual change!
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