Nice story, definitely Gould have kept going. Thanks for sharing.

thank you. reread. just FYI in the beginning there are blocks of random text in the center of a few sentences

awesome. thanks

I love the idea of a sequel for this! Spike's family is so cute. I'd love to see more of them trying to adjust to the real world.

Wow. This is by far the best Spike/Buffy pairing I've read. Ever. This was excellent, full of drama, always kept ya guessing!...I would advise maybe checking the complete box on this one, though...Currently it's still in progress...

Keep up the good work!

Eminnis and Alicia

Great story!

Really excellent story you've written. I really enjoyed it. You really know how to make believable OC such as Cordova. This story was just brilliant.

dear jessi, it took me a day to detect your work, read through half of your stories, miss the bloody love parade coz of all this and make an account for this page just for to drop you this note. greetz from germany and ill take this "writing fast" statement as a promise. cheers from berlin. :-)

You continue to amaze me )

Yet another fantastic piece. Have you ever thought about writing proffesionally? Releasing a novel? I'd be first in line to read it, beleive me.

The way you write...it's just so intense. I love it. Plausible, and REAL. A lot of the Spuffy I read seems somehow...unbeleivable. But yours, its real. And not just in the Buffy-verse. the way you play with their emotions, the reactions you get from the characters are true to life.

I'm hoping you'll keep to your promise of a sequel?

The whole vampire fledging family idea really interests me. I can see another story being drawn from it quite easily, though you have the talent to make it amazing.

Thanks again, and thanks for your reply to my last review )

Dude... You should be paid for this... It's awesome! Props to you.

I'm only on chapter 5 and loving it so far. Can't wait to finish.

great story. hehe, your little vampire family could become a cheaper by the dozen tale. except with vampires. lots of them. hopefully all hot. :) i really enjoyed this. it was a blast. looking forward to future stories. :)

Good ending. Dead general, chipless Spike equals happy Squirl. Good job.

I really enjoyed this story. The ideas behind the plot were fresh and disturbingly likely, given the various characters.

loved your story, and you're great with the fast updates! :D