I realize this story was over ages ago but i am reviewing it now anyway. This was a really beautiful story, just like Emerald Eyes. The vows were just...beautiful. Anyway...i have read/am reading most of your stories and i love them all.

First of all, awsome awsome story! absolutly wonderful, unique (with the whole harry time travel thingee), and un-corny/cliche!

second of all...

omgomgomg! you NEED a sequal! are you crazy? you WILL WRITE A SEQUAL! ARGH! ok. well, about idea's, what else to write about other than how

1) dumbeldore mysteriously "takes care" of peter p.

2) how james and lily go through pregnancy

3) sirius and emma's wedding, later...Ryan (or not, considering you'd have to make him good friends with harry, major plot change...or you could have ryan and harry's sister fall in love or something)

4) remus' proposal to jen, and their wedding

5) everyone getting pregnant nad being happy-happy (with a few humorous glitches along the way, NO deaths)

6) Ron and Harry's first play-date when they're todlers

7) Random scenes from Harry's happier childhood (remember not to make him change into a spoiled bratty kid, even though that's more likely how he would have turned out)

8) Harry is still the boy-who-lived (james and lily weren't hit by the curse, only harry)

9) Harry has has a family to help him get through life burdened with finding the horcruxes (if you want to incorporate in HBP)

10) Harry's seventh year (idk what you'd do about dumbledore's death, since it's an important factor in Harry's seventh year, but him being alive was an important factor in your time traveling fanfic)

11) Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione

12) the boys getting girl-help from Sirius and James

13) etc...the possibilities are endless!

JUST WRITE A SEQUAL! YOU WILL BE THE MOST CELEBRATED AUTHOR ON FANFIC (in my opinion) AND WILL BE BLESSED WITH THOUSANDS OF REVIEWS!

-genvieve

Yeah. I think that was a good plave to leave the story, but I just wanna know if Lily and James survive. Well, anmyway, good job!

AH! you can't stop writing! no!1

WAH!

-goth hamster

aw. : (

o well

thats ok, if you have some inspiration then write one, until then its ok if you don't!

OK, I have lots of ideas for you.

1. You should make the new one start with Harry being born and work up from there.

2. Sirius and I get a divorce and I marry someone called Hamish (lol. Umm, the only reason I put that in was because I know how much you love destroying my realionship with Sirius).

3. Something with Claudia. Like you should do a whole thing about 'the returning of the evil Claud' or something.

4. I have no idea.

Hope you liked my ideas. (My fav was 4. lol, just kidding! My fav was the first one!)

beachbabe12

so good

that was so good! How about...um...ok, i no that green is the colour of envy, but wots the colourb of regenge? that coloured eye! coz if you dont have them do wot u started in this damns tory then I think that i might just explode! majorly!thanks 4 writing such gr8 stories!luv Ella Evans

SEQUEL SEQUEL! oh my gosh i kept checking to see if you updated, but it never showed an update until like today, even though that is like really late... haha anyways i completely loved your story and it was so sweet! i cant wait for your hopefully next one! and you did a great job with the marriage vows, how did you remember all that, i know its right because i've been to a few weddings, but you had it down! please write yet another sequel!

AGH I WANT TO SNAP CLAUDIA'S LITTLE NECK (I GUESS THE CLIFF BOTTOM DID THAT FOR HER THOUGH)well lol ttyl ;)~ Julia

I think you should do a sequel! I love both these stories! Anyway, if you are still looking for a title you could do something like, "Eyes as green as a fresh pickled toads" Sorry, I am not very creative!

cut i mean CUTE

ok that is well sweet and everything so you can write well

aw!

soo sweet!

if there is gonna be a sequl {sp?}

Pls make another chappie but labeled author's note and say wat the sequel is!

thx!

Excelent story...I love it! Except...James took Lily as his husband. ;)