Fabulous. Second reading. Still great.

Her name is Sally, not Ruth

Umm, you know that the boys call Jeff 'Dad' not 'Father', right?

great story so this chapter is so sad than happy

Very good, no tears but nearly, look forward to the sequal

What a fantastic story! I'm so glad I stumbled across it when I did. The emotion feels real, the brothers are well connected and nice with work with Lucille. It's nice to see a story that incorporates her. And I do like the plot of the story, so my question is where's the sequel? Top marks. :)

Oh when that happend I freaked but you scared the hell out of me whn I went to turkey we went over the mountans you could see them then I remembered this story so you scared the crap out of me lol

a good story.

in age order however it is Scott, John, Virgil, Gordon then Alan

that chapter was really funny still laughing lol xx

hey fuzzbug

first of all, nice story, but there are just two things i was thinking about

Firstly...why wasn't the thunderbird aircrafts shot at/down as well as the jet?

And in the hospital, being stuck in sub freezing temperatures, there would be a case of hyperthermia... ah well

Sorry, just love attention to detail XD

Keep writing up the awesomeness

-Wild dog

what happened exactly with the bridge incident with alan and his grandma i forget?

Er, I'm sorry, but that was all a bit unrealistic. First of all, why was everybody joking around while Alan was still in surgery? It was like they'd forgotten about him. Second, no doctor would come running to the waiting family and drag them to the operating room when there's been a complication. That's just what the doctors and nurses don't need, frantic people. Third, they don't use the defibrillators for half an hour I think. I'm not a docotor, but that seems a bit long to get a heart beating again.

How on earth are they going to survive this?

You confused me a little though I'm, afraid. You never said they were outside of the jet. How did they get out? It sounded like they were pretty far away from it, too. Weird.

Oh god, that doesn't look too good for Scott and Alan, does it? Hope the others are going to go looking for them soon.

Very cool so far! The scene with the sundae was hilarious! I was looking for a good story focusing on Scott and Alan, lucky me I found this.

Can't wait to see what will happen to them.