"Tug, tug" - It's going to be my favorite line for a long time :-)

Brooke, as in a little River…
Lol :)
I think you got River and Jayne down to a T. Really good story!

lol, funny cfrack fic! I like that this story is only dialogue. It works well and the dialogue is well done too.

What the name the baby is funny also :)

Brooke seems to be a popular choice for Rayne babies. Not that there's anything wrong with that! That was really cute, almost seemed like regular banter back and forth, and it was very easy to picture the two arguing like that. Great work!

Awesome. Just. Awesome.

*snort* love the compromise!

Too cute! The name Brooke is perfect for them. The J/R dynamic was adorable and I loved the way River was able to pull his chain so effortlessly. A Christmas sequel would be awesome, especially with any and all reactions of Jayne's mother to River. ; ) Great fic.

Aww too cute... Jayne with a baby daughter... double trouble for him huh!

Okay I never excepted a story like this but hey, it was intresting. Not my favorite story but a good idea.

awe! i love Jayne! so cute

Hahahahaha! That was awsome.

Aw that was so sweet! And written well for being thrown together at one in the morning. Thanx for sharing this. Great job.

SQUE! Love it as much now as I did the first time! And RayneBabyFics ARE like Crack! The more I read, the more I want. I should prolly put mine here too, eh?

Really good dialogue! I never would have put those two together, but awesome dialgoue.

OH that is so very cute! Thanks for sharing.

"tug, tug"...lol!

Don't take this the wrong way, but even though this was River and Jayne, I couldn't help imagining Trip and T'Pol from ST speaking these lines.

Great job!