keep going its good!

RC

what a gr8 story! I really love your writting style as well as the creative flow the bounds from character to character. You somehow manage to keep each character seperate but unified within the total creative flow. Interesting point: Baen .com home of baen publishing house is always on the lookout for new talent in the sci fi realm.

good luck

J

Please make asequal to this story, their both exclent,so please make anoughter sequal

Another bloody brilliant tale.

I can't help but love your characters, and you write so well!

Awesomeness.

Ok.

That guy was just STUPID.

Dumb.

Idiotic.

Mentally deficient.

Fuked in the head.

How many ways do I gotta say it?

I mean, X was LETTING them GO.

SAFELY.

UNHURT.

And he ATTACKED her.

RETARD!

Caboose from RvB is smarter than that, and that's saying something!

Well, if this is going to be the final chapter, I think it's fitting. :)

Nice job, overall; I like how you were able to show the different characters and their multiple-layer opinions. Very good work in that regard.

~Dawley

Wow great story so far! Please update soon!

...oh my God.

YOU UPDATED!1! *crash-glomps Raptor-Chick*

Ahem. ;

I like this new chapter; plenty of tension and not knowing what will happen to X13, One and Ebony. Then there's Cal, but he's human. :P

As usual, eagerly awaiting the next update,

~Dawley

this is good

I did not think x-13 would want to agree to letting the humans have a xeno, facehugger or egg.

and now her hive might not even listen to her

AH man, PLEASE, this is too good to be left with a cliffhanger, I'm dieing to see what will happen to the trio please, please, please update soon.

Great, marvelous, splendid chapter, this is awesome, I'm beginning to like Ebony.

Now that is more like it, great chapter and story so far.

Ah man, can just one meeting with the xenos get to end peacefully, I guess that will never happened and I like teh story so far.

I think the end of this chapter was ratter funny, I could visualize Hyde's face when Cal told her about the meeting, great work and hope you continue it.

Something tells me this is going to be another bloody blattle but hey, in a way I like it and the story so far, update soon.