Reviews for The Mechanic's Daughter
Guest chapter 12 . 4/15/2018
Waste. of. my. time. The ending flopped.
neverstoplvngDBZ chapter 2 . 4/5/2018
What in the name of planet Vegeta is she in love with geta's brother and also I thought geta's brother's name was Tarble!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24/2017
very good i lik this
Jazzmo03 chapter 20 . 7/31/2017
Oh my god! Kyo at the end! I loved this, you're a really good writer! I'm definitely going to read other fanfics of yours! :D :D
Guest chapter 20 . 7/14/2016
This was the best thing ever XD a lot funnier then thought it would be! Since this was 11 years ago you probably have your own children using things against you got blackmail
Guest chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
Love it but its gonna be a vegeta and bulma love story right?!
AlexTheEnderman chapter 19 . 8/11/2015
(shoots everyone away with a ki blast) no fighting understand
AlexTheEnderman chapter 18 . 8/11/2015
Do you three wanna die if not then let trunks go
AlexTheEnderman chapter 16 . 8/11/2015
Hey you too leave my best friend trunks alone I'm way stronger than you two can't you see he has enough trouble in his heels
AlexTheEnderman chapter 13 . 8/11/2015
Keep up the good work star and don't forget do not let trunks eat the cookie
AlexTheEnderman chapter 12 . 8/11/2015
Trunks whatever you do don't eat the cookie and vegeta you are doing so well hope you and bulma have a happy ending
AlexTheEnderman chapter 11 . 8/11/2015
Dafuq I'm reviewing cause I don't wanna die
Guest chapter 15 . 8/3/2015
I hate when bulma calls vegeta a creep :/
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
I hope you have paired vegeta with bulma I'll hate the story if you didn't :/
Sympathetic Daydreamer chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
BULMA VEGETA FOR EVER BITCH!-not making fun of u but for people who wanna match them with someone else-
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